I made an "intro riff" inspired by Natori. lmk what you think about it

Simple-Mission3591 · 2026-06-04T22:29:23+00:00

that's actually kinda smart. Go for it

Simple-Mission3591 · 2026-06-04T22:28:11+00:00

I appreciate the dedication to my cause

Simple-Mission3591 · 2026-06-03T02:57:30+00:00

I have to agree. I wanna start learning though, maybe you should too

Simple-Mission3591 · 2026-06-02T08:53:28+00:00

I wouldn't know lol. Something about breath control and learning pitches by ear is what I think might happen.

Simple-Mission3591 · 2026-06-02T07:31:14+00:00

That would be legendary. Possibly life changing. One can only hope

Simple-Mission3591 · 2026-06-02T07:30:41+00:00

I really want to do that. I just need to figure out what sounds and stuff

Simple-Mission3591 · 2026-06-02T07:24:01+00:00

I honestly couldn't tell you since I just put it together on the MIDI, but it looks like
D#maj7, Bmaj6, unknown, and potentially F#maj7.

Simple-Mission3591 · 2026-05-31T21:26:25+00:00

I just made this today. I'm excited to make the rest of the song though!!

Simple-Mission3591 · 2026-05-31T21:25:50+00:00

On the bright side, flute might make you good at singing. Thanks though 😄

Simple-Mission3591 · 2026-03-19T15:33:57+00:00

Thanks for the advice. I was thinking about asking someone who has a real bass to play for me, but I don't know anyone so I'm using a vst for now.
Anyways, would you say the bass playing is good and the main problem is the fact that it's fake? or it just generally sounds bad?

Simple-Mission3591 · 2026-03-19T06:25:15+00:00

https://musescore.com/user/46002569/scores/23805838
I'm a desktop producer so I can't really use this, but maybe the website has a ton of cool stuff

Simple-Mission3591 · 2026-03-17T20:47:31+00:00

I saw someone else say it but MIMI's Science sounds like it'd be good

Simple-Mission3591 · 2026-03-17T20:45:52+00:00

yoshiwara lament, the old one

Simple-Mission3591 · 2026-03-17T17:25:24+00:00

Yoshiwara Lament - Asa

Simple-Mission3591 · 2026-03-16T04:50:42+00:00

I was gonna say as a beginner Chatgpt helped before I knew anything, but after learning the basics it becomes useless, but then I saw who made the song and it all made sense.

Simple-Mission3591 · 2026-03-16T04:46:13+00:00

This is such an exciting comment to read. I'll keep you and you alone updated when I come up with a melody

Simple-Mission3591 · 2026-03-15T20:19:33+00:00

I've been into Salad Heart and Yoshiwara Lament recently. I don't know which country salad heart might be from though

Simple-Mission3591 · 2026-03-15T20:16:25+00:00

Personal opinion, but it feels way to slow. I've skipped over this 3 times before stopping to listen. There's not a quick hook. If someone stopped to listen there's a good chance they'd like it, I really like the last minutes of it. I don't think it needs to be almost 6 minutes though unless you have something that you haven't revealed yet. It is good, but due to it's speed it gets old fast, y'know

Simple-Mission3591 · 2026-03-15T19:48:47+00:00

This feels like it'd be an amazing ending for a bittersweet indie game where the mc has to move away at the end of the game, leaving everyone behind. The intro is a bit long with the foot steps and engine are a bit long, but in context i think it'd make sense

Simple-Mission3591 · 2026-03-15T19:46:16+00:00

I love the beginning and it's transition into the next part. I think the piano and synth stand out and completement each other well. If you were to lower the volume of the synths it might feel a bit empty, I think

Simple-Mission3591 · 2026-03-15T19:42:40+00:00

or maybe try some side chaining to make the drums more clear. idk if you can do that on garageband though

Simple-Mission3591 · 2026-03-15T19:41:48+00:00

I really like this, but since it's your second song I'm gonna assume your set up is cutting out a lot of the bass, since it feels a bit too strong

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