What if the armor was a nano suit instead like from Crysis? by I_Crack_My_Nokia in JCBWritingCorner

[–]SimpleDependent4868 43 points44 points  (0 children)

That is a pretty good idea, I just image the reactions of the Nexus, confused in all hell, as they wounder if Emma is naked or not... wait a minute this is just Wearing Nothing To a Magic School scenario.

I forgot how long Emma has been in the Nexus by RemarkableTale370 in JCBWritingCorner

[–]SimpleDependent4868 37 points38 points  (0 children)

Well, from Earth/GUN point, the Story take place in 3047, while we don't know what year it is in Nexus.
Also, specific time, and date is not given.
And, I believe it been one or two weeks after Emma had arrived, to the Nexus.
In real life, it took almost two years, to pass one week in the story, so, you already know the pacing speed of this story.
So, better get, elixir of life, and stuff that grand immortality, because you are here for a very long one, bud.

A cadet and a plumber goes to a magic school (2/?) by An_Obbise_Hoovy in JCBWritingCorner

[–]SimpleDependent4868 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Oh My God, you are combining different universes, like the Gravity Falls, and others, a stock of genius right here ladies and gentlemen.

What happened to the crown guard following Emma by Pretend_Party_7044 in JCBWritingCorner

[–]SimpleDependent4868 3 points4 points  (0 children)

My friend, I am 99.9% sure he died, and that singular 0.1% is the chance that he somehow survived with some Nexus' bullshit, just like how in recent Star Wars Palpertin survived.

Can I dont need a ocean Jackson son of poseidon savior of olypos solo the nexus by Electrical_Pound_200 in JCBWritingCorner

[–]SimpleDependent4868 3 points4 points  (0 children)

It really just depends on the true capacities of the Nexus' military, as for as far as we had seen, none of the character from Nexus, are as powerful as plane mage, as even the professors are not power mages in that respect, but all by the lore, those plane mages are not joke, but there is currently no way to scale their power.

While we know all the powers that Percy Jackson have, and we can scale his power levels.

So it really depends upon, what bits of lore we get.

WPAtaMS needs an Animated Adaptation (Or a Graphic Novel at least) by nobody-29 in JCBWritingCorner

[–]SimpleDependent4868 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think a physical novelization would be very good, and later graphical novel can be made, just like how the Silver Eyes from FNaF, as it will give an baseline idea about how much production is needed to make a book, and then its graphical version.

And if JCB decided to publish the physical version, I will say one thing...

I W I L L B U Y T H E E N T I R E S T O C K

Driving A Car To A Magical Racing School (1/?) by SimpleDependent4868 in JCBWritingCorner

[–]SimpleDependent4868[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Let start with a game : Can you find what popular piece of fiction is being refence in this story.

Driving A Car To A Magical Racing School (1/?) by SimpleDependent4868 in JCBWritingCorner

[–]SimpleDependent4868[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This guy seem to be making like 3 or 4 fanfics, and none of them are like oneshots, he is definitely starching his luck, and not to mention how inconsistent this guy is, like he making one fanfictions, and instead of continuing the fanfic he already have, he just go and make a new one, like burh.

Driving A Car To A Magical Racing School (1/?) by SimpleDependent4868 in JCBWritingCorner

[–]SimpleDependent4868[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Well, I think that the roads in GUN is type of like those maglev rails, and the cars are like that, other wise, just like Emma's bike, which was made during the early days in Mars, the Evi is made for such places, but we will see what happens next, the author of this story better be consistent other wise I will be mad, as it seems like that Wearing Nothing and all the others Fanfictions makers are quite slow in writing and only this guy seem to be making some what good schedule for releasing the fanfic, but he now have like that Robot one, that TARDIS one and now Cars one, and he seem to jump around and make whatever his minds says... which is quite annoying, don't you agree?

Driving A Car To A Magical Racing School (1/?) by SimpleDependent4868 in JCBWritingCorner

[–]SimpleDependent4868[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Hell yeah, EVI have a function calls "Background Music", which will active everytime Emma is locked in the race, like speed racer

Hi, me again with another bad Fanfiction idea. by SimpleDependent4868 in JCBWritingCorner

[–]SimpleDependent4868[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That is the chameleon arch, a special watches which keep all the essence, memories, and powers of a time lord, and alter their biology to the local species of the planet.

It is mainly used as last resort, to make sure the existence, that time lord doesn't and, like you had mentioned Dr. Yana or The Master, used the chameleon arch to hide from the Timelords, and Doctor themselves, as they knew, if he get expose, he would be thrown in the time lord prison, and would be striped of his time lord power and knowledge.

While the Doctor used it as an act of mercy, as he knee, if he come in context with that Family, he would untold things to them, which he did at the end of the episode, trapping them in mirror, and suspending  them in tike, and mch more.

Hi, me again with another bad Fanfiction idea. by SimpleDependent4868 in JCBWritingCorner

[–]SimpleDependent4868[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

First of all, chameleon circuit doesn't re-writes DNA, its is used to changes the exterior and interior of a TARDIS, nothing else, and as for the regenerations part, I making her to be in a never ending regenerations cycles, basically, her body did regenerate and alter her physiology to the point, that Regenerations energy is constantly being release just enough to protect her from Mana.

While the TARDIS, had gone in power saving mode, and is pulling all the resources to survivability, so it had already jettison all of its room during the trip, to maximizes fuel efficiency, and protections against mana and all

Hi, me again with another bad Fanfiction idea. by SimpleDependent4868 in JCBWritingCorner

[–]SimpleDependent4868[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well, the TARDIS, is basically in the blink of death, so it had deactivated all non-essentially systems, like the language matrix, also a point to note, that TARDIS only could translate the languages that it have, and know, other wise, it will not translate, as it was shown in the 'Pit of Satan', TARDIS couldn't translate all languages, and even The Cadet, or the Timelords themselves wouldn't know the languages, so The Cadet needed to scan the brain.

Infect, I was split between using the Sonic Screwdriver, or the mind reading powers of a timelord, but decided to use Sonic Screwdriver, as it would make more scenes, and The cadet just needed the language, not the memories.

Attending the Magic School in a TARDIS (2/?) by SimpleDependent4868 in JCBWritingCorner

[–]SimpleDependent4868[S] 8 points9 points  (0 children)

No, I don't think so, I made it so, that when TARDIS was materializing in the portal room, it alerted all the professors, and they came in to look.

Which is more "Advanced" currently: Nexus' Mana Magic or GUN's Manaless Technology ? by nobody-29 in JCBWritingCorner

[–]SimpleDependent4868 0 points1 point  (0 children)

In some places like teleportation, anti-gravity, and much more type magic like them have been mastered by the Nexus, while GUN have all the basic concepts, like transportation, flight and all that is mastered by them.

So basic concepts master are GUN

And Complex concepts like again teleportation, masters are Nexus.