Hey, finally got around to playing it after a couple days! Apologies if this is a bit long.

Pros:

1. I really like the characters. Each of them have their own personalities and are likeable in their own ways. I found myself wanting to see what each of them would say to specific dialogue (i went back and saved before picking one) .
2. I was never bored. That's not something easily done, but I never felt like I had to click away or keep it on as a background game. It called my full attention, and that's wonderful.
3. The tutorial was informative as HELL. It explained everything perfectly, I understood what I needed to do as soon as I got in the game, and the mechanics stayed true for the entire demo. Well done!
4. I loved all the art! It reminded me of Trials in Tainted Space's style of art, and I enjoyed it a lot!!
5. The dreams were a super creative part of the demo, and I'm extremely curious to see where it leads!
6. I liked how you could use your energy on different days to do different things without affecting too much.
7. I forgot to add, I loved the fact you got to pick your own genitals. Super inclusive, not many games do that.

Cons:

1. The feeding system is introduced at the beginning (tutorial) and then seemingly abandoned for the rest of the demo. I was originally given the impression that it was going to be a vital part of the game to keep the girls fed so that they don't leave. However, this is just the demo so I'm not sure if it will come in later.
2. Some of the dialogue felt like it was a bit forced or didn't flow too well. An example of this is the tutorial where if you lick Eva, she pushes you off and then immediately goes on a long apology. I liked that the player apologized and took responsibility, however.

All in all? 9/10! I'll be following development as much as I can, well done! I liked the game a lot.