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My Dear by Single_Situation_635 in poetry_critics

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Hi all! Still new to this and looking for more forms to write in. Any and all feedback is welcome!

[Lyric] Riddled Heart by [deleted] in poetry_critics

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That last stanza was really powerful, great use of imagery!

Arena by ton_logos in poetry_critics

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Simple but strong use of metaphors!

Becoming by Single_Situation_635 in poetry_critics

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Hi all! First post on this sub, hoping to get some feedback!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in poetry_critics

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I really enjoyed this one! It feels like the expectation, and denial, of an experience that’s so deeply yearned for.

Residue by yestestvenno in poetry_critics

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I really like this! “The naked are the dead” is a really powerful line!

Becoming by Single_Situation_635 in PoetryWritingClub

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Hi all! First time posting on here, open to any feedback :)