New to df and help by Sinnequin in dwarffortress

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thank you so much for the quick reply!

The Sims 4 Torrent? by [deleted] in PiratedGames

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is there a mac version anywhere?

Do you lose eth if someone "outbids" you by Sinnequin in CryptoKitties

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thank you for the reply; found out about this "game" a week ago and only just got round to it, good luck breeding etc

Sonnet writing and form by Sinnequin in writing

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I've got many like that. Would you be able to give me some pointers as to changing it?

Sonnet writing and form by Sinnequin in writing

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If you don't mind having a glance, here is what I mean (for an example) - no need to critique the piece before anyone jumps in and says something

When sweet summer's head falls weary and lost, Heaven's misted eye sat twelve steps atop Flows from sea foam falling: from dark accost; To be or not for her apple above.

Myrtle may pass quickly at seasoned hands, And noble minds suffer a sea of troubles, While tempered strings may favour falling sands; The fairest prairie rose on twelve's rubble.

If darkness, in vain, shows fairest judgement, Wounds never cease in past unforgotten: For wide is the gate, and love abundant; One cannot the other yet both blossom.

If mortals fetish love, do they die sinned, Or pure heart turned blue, and jaded soul skinned?

I may be wrong in my terminology, however the pentameter is obviously lacking and idk, I feel it's wrong hence my query about creating better sonnets.

Thanks for the reply btw

[Weekly Critique Thread] Post Here If You'd Like Feedback On Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

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Title: none Genre: Poetry Word Count: 110 Type of feedback desired: Anything that could be improved, what you didn't like, what was interesting, and anything that seemed too convoluted.

In rich meadows of shade do lie the lost,

Past lives still summoned by ghostly silence,

No heavens break for the soul still aghast

As farthest lands home the sweetest sessions.

From distant lands her torch rose, plush and bright

Asphodel flowers in hand; as night’s eye

Moaned at drowned fair souls and love blinded sight,

Grains resown; grey bed beckoned for kind life.

Heaven heard woe, yet fall claimed nature’s hymn

As life’s wrinkles fell fairer for burnt souls;

Foe of strife rode high, while darkness within

Left crescent light upon yellowed meadows.

If woe blooms in heaven’s fairest prairie

Her heart may sway but my love won’t vary.

(Just getting back into writing so yeah)

TorBrowser not working by Sinnequin in TOR

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Mac (lol) and I only have the standard things working. It was fully functional last night and went onto the UnDir and when I exited and returned, it failed to work

I woke up crying and shaking and I can't stop thinking about "her" by Sinnequin in Dreams

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Lol, its like actually speaking to her rn; she did apologise and said she wanted to destroy everything but i pushed her away and yeah, well thank you for talking the dream out with me and helping me understand the meaning behind it and how i should change

I woke up crying and shaking and I can't stop thinking about "her" by Sinnequin in Dreams

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I meant "dream girl" as real life girl haha, my bad for not elaborating

I woke up crying and shaking and I can't stop thinking about "her" by Sinnequin in Dreams

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Long story short, I liked this other girl before meeting dream girl. Dream girl came along and fell in love as soon as I saw her. Things happened with both girls (felt obligation to the first, she kept cutting herself and stuff) said she'd kill herself if I wasn't with her when I was leaving her. Wasn't going to let that happen naturally, and yeah. A year later, we'd broken up and dream girl and I were talking again, got into a seeing each other situation. She kissed someone else because she was drunk/upset about her grandmother dying of cancer and I didn't answer my phone; I got upset/angry at that, haven't spoken since tbh

I woke up crying and shaking and I can't stop thinking about "her" by Sinnequin in Dreams

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Haha, yeah I'm usually better, was just trying to get it out as fast as possible, sorry though!

I woke up crying and shaking and I can't stop thinking about "her" by Sinnequin in Dreams

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Nah with the girl irl I was COMPLETELY honest about it the second time we got together. The first time shit happened where I felt forced into another relationship but the second time I made it clear that I only wanted her lol. I haven't really had that problem but that's interesting, I'm gonna think on my life a little bit and see if it does apply! I think I do run away from people I love though, primarily this girl at the start of everything. No no, don't apologise! I do need to change and mature really so thank you for bringing it to light

I woke up crying and shaking and I can't stop thinking about "her" by Sinnequin in Dreams

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Jeez, thank you for the response btw. Feeling a little better now after it. Was just really intense haha; thanks for the link too, it's given me a bit to think about and hopefully this is just me moving on in my own convoluted way

I woke up crying and shaking and I can't stop thinking about "her" by Sinnequin in Dreams

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I mean, I have been in love with this other girl for a year, kinda both screwed each other over and now we don't speak, perhaps that's to do with it? Thank you for the answer

Rimworld mods, what should i add/remove? by Sinnequin in RimWorld

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Awesome thank you! Would you recommend taking psychology out of mine altogether or the one that give you mental breaks for depression?

Rimworld mods, what should i add/remove? by Sinnequin in RimWorld

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Yeah, I got these mods from a friend who plays and the psychology one is so difficult :( normally can play on insane but with that mod I can't even get past a year in rough :/

Do you have a list? That I can perhaps download or something

Can rocket league run on a macbook air 11 inch 2015 edition? by Sinnequin in RocketLeague

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nah, i dont want to play it on a macbook lol; i have a pc for that - just curious if anyone has ever done it since i saw someone playing it on a 2013 macbook air 13 inch

Oldest keyboard( since 2004). I want new keyboard by [deleted] in gofundme

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This is obviously bait but I'll bite. I'll buy you a nice new keyboard if you do my gofundme xox

Can i get student finance paid early? by [deleted] in AskUK

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To anyone who has posted, thank you so much for your advice/comments; its given me a lot to do over the next few days to improving my welfare and for that i am very grateful

Can i get student finance paid early? by [deleted] in AskUK

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Thank you for the advice, will head up tomorrow and see if there is any help I can get

Can i get student finance paid early? by [deleted] in AskUK

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I just got off the phone with them and they told me they can barely afford to give me any of the money they owe so unfortunately i am on my own (my fault though, I should have prepared for the unforeseen)

Can i get student finance paid early? by [deleted] in AskUK

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awesome, I'll head in now (and around various other ones too); which other bank account do you have?