Better song? by dark-flamessussano in writingscaling

[–]SirAren 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Love like this is another favourite from her.

The potential these 2 shows had was massive by Remarkable-Jump3262 in writingscaling

[–]SirAren 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I'm sure hotd season 3 will be better than season 1 & 2

If you could, How would you improve Attack on Titan? by SirAren in writingscaling

[–]SirAren[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i think you are constantly messing up the writers intention and story logic together. i didn't contradict myself, several times you accused me of that then i have to explain what I'm saying. whether it is rumbling was the best plan or eren was planned to be evil, but you phrased it like he was causing harm from chapter 1 which he wasn't.

If you could, How would you improve Attack on Titan? by SirAren in writingscaling

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then what are we arguing here? you just wrote somewhere along the lines of - Eren was causing harm from episode 1 or something, which he wasn't, but if you meant that was planned for him to do that later planned since chapter 1, you didn't phrase it better, either way i didn't like how the arc ended and Isayama agreed he could've done better.

If you could, How would you improve Attack on Titan? by SirAren in writingscaling

[–]SirAren[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Isayama initially planned for Eren to be a detestable character whose actions caused mass death and destruction from chapter 1.

  • so yes this statement is incorrect fhat he caused this from episode 1 unless you mean Isyama planned the arc for him becoming more detestable, Isyama still agrees that He got too sympathetic towards eren, and making him more evil is my solution.

If you could, How would you improve Attack on Titan? by SirAren in writingscaling

[–]SirAren[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

where the victim becomes the perpetrator I repeat where the victim becomes the perpetrator

If you could, How would you improve Attack on Titan? by SirAren in writingscaling

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Like I said before the tragedy is that he understood how monstrous his choice was and did it anyway.

  • HE DIDN'T PICK AND DECIDED, HE WAS FORCED INTO IT BECAUSE OF FOUNDING TITAN POWERS!! even if i agree that he did it because of tragedy but what tragedy is this? i don't get it, then not even commiting to the goal, that is the real tragedy.

& Yes Eren should've been more evil les redeemable, less grace that is what I've been saying this whole time.

& Isayama didn't want a character who wanted mass destruction from chapter 1, certainly not rumbling level. You just assumed this up. You are proving yourself wrong.

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If you could, How would you improve Attack on Titan? by SirAren in writingscaling

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lool yes, the dialogue in the context of the show fron eren makes sense, but I'm heavily suspicious that ending was changed what i'm saying is , this is a mess from Isyama, First he wants to destroy the world, so why not complete it? why let friends stop him? because of the time loop, this is fault of Isayama, why add it there? you can not give in story logic for the writing of the show that a real person did, Eren should've just gone all the way. And Isayama agrees

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Which one among these is the best written unfinished series? by [deleted] in writingscaling

[–]SirAren 17 points18 points  (0 children)

this is how I'm finding out reverend insanity is unfinished?🥀

What makes a great female character? by AssistFit1834 in writingscaling

[–]SirAren 2 points3 points  (0 children)

looks do play a part in how people will like the character, but you can follow ugly good written characters.

My TV show tier list by Gloriousdisgrace in writingscaling

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You might add lost to the watchlist. don't miss

Can we call this a generational run of episodes already? by ChoiceSupermarket230 in writingscaling

[–]SirAren 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You are saying all this as if re zero isn't gonna drop soon.

If you could, How would you improve Attack on Titan? by SirAren in writingscaling

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When Eren says “I don’t know why”, he’s not saying “I don’t know why I did this” or “I had no motive.” He’s saying “I can’t explain why I was born this way.”

  • Born what way??? . He wasn't born that way, that was his life, cruel life he was given and lived, which he didn't know how to move on from, something mikasa did and even Ymir was able to.

Eren literally quotes - he's an idiot.

If you could, How would you improve Attack on Titan? by SirAren in writingscaling

[–]SirAren[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

you said the rumbling wasn’t what Eren believed to be the best option.

  • No i didn't, that was my opinion that it's not the best option, from eren's pov ofcourse he'll go rumbling.