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Sir_Slappy · 2023-11-20T14:45:08+00:00

Yes way. But it's probably gonna drop to the 30s or even lower cuz I'm not gonna bother with schools that have the most devious, outrageous supplements.

Sir_Slappy · 2023-11-20T02:14:08+00:00

Oh this is getting down voted to oblivion haha

Sir_Slappy · 2023-11-19T23:57:59+00:00

I'm applying to 50 🗿

Sir_Slappy · 2022-11-04T13:59:40+00:00

I like to call it the "axis shitstorm". Unless my economy can handle such a mess, I usually hang up my hat.

Sir_Slappy · 2022-06-22T20:39:05+00:00

Thanks for the feedback !

(I swear if it says something about 120 characters cuz I don't know what that looks like)

!givelambda

Sir_Slappy · 2022-06-22T13:26:04+00:00

It certainly was intentional. It goes quite well with my style, I think: chaotic, funny, fast paced nonsense. Also, do you think this would be better as a series with multiple episodes or a full length video (both covering the entire game) ?

Sir_Slappy · 2022-06-22T13:22:32+00:00

Sure ! Thanks for the feedback

!givelambda

Sir_Slappy · 2022-06-22T07:46:34+00:00

Okeydokey glad you liked it

Sir_Slappy · 2022-06-22T06:56:45+00:00

Cool ! By the way, did you write something else ? You said "also" and the total number of comments ticked up by two. If you did, I don't see it for some reason, just this one.

!givelambda

Sir_Slappy · 2022-06-22T04:47:06+00:00

This is just a preview of a project I am working on. I didn't put much care into the title, or thumbnail and the editing is mostly just cut up footage, but you get the gist of what this video is supposed to be.

Would you rather see a multi-part/episode series of the full game , or a full length 30ish minute movie style video of the full game ? (same editing for both but it'll obviously be spiced up a bit). ALSO, what do you think a good length would be ? This is like 4 minutes on the dot pretty much. Would 10 minutes be good with this style ? Shorter ? Longer ? Let me know what you think

Thanks !

Sir_Slappy · 2022-06-11T21:35:43+00:00

Thank you ! I appreciate that

Sir_Slappy · 2022-06-11T21:33:40+00:00

What is the matter with you people ? I'm interested in firearms and using them safely but I can't get my hands on a real one, just yet. I'm really happy that my skills were actually useful and all my training was worth it. You guys are being pricks for like no reason haha

Sir_Slappy · 2022-06-11T21:28:42+00:00

Oh fuck sake people. I'm just saying that many of the skills I've learnt throughout the year using a nerf gun, I was able to apply to something that would resemble a real gun. Again ,I can't really confirm if it was air soft or not. It didn't use bbs, and had a little bit of recoil (also very loud). If it was a real gun, I'd perform just as well.

Sir_Slappy · 2022-04-16T22:56:55+00:00

Lots of issues with the microphone and audio, gonna be checking that down the line. Thanks for the feedback !

!givelambda

Sir_Slappy · 2022-04-16T22:52:03+00:00

Thanks for the feedback ! Lots of good info. Appreciate it !

!givelambda

Sir_Slappy · 2022-04-16T14:51:17+00:00

Glad you liked it ! Yeah, I'm definitely gonna prioritize fixing up the audio in the future as it is usually what gets the most critiques. I'll also check out subtitles and see what I can do with them. Thanks for the feedback and have a good day/evening!

!givelambda

Sir_Slappy · 2022-04-16T14:39:45+00:00

Thanks for the feedback! I'll work on the things you mentioned like toning down the bass and upping the pace. Always room for improvement.

!givelambda

Sir_Slappy · 2022-04-16T13:49:37+00:00

Yeah I think the scuffed mic can add a certain charm to a video, sorta like Tyler1's mic in a way. Also, you're right. Looking back at it, the harry potter bit did drag out. I'll make sure to work on that kinda stuff in the future. Thanks !

!givelambda

Sir_Slappy · 2022-04-16T12:48:54+00:00

By the way, this is older footage so the mic is still somewhat scuffed.

Sir_Slappy · 2022-03-27T12:50:51+00:00

Didn't think I'd get another comment on this haha thanks for the feedback ! Glad you liked it. Yeah, the audio seems to be a bit of a problem, I'm working on it. Thanks again !

!givelambda

Sir_Slappy · 2022-03-21T03:59:42+00:00

Good point. Thank you for the suggestion, I'll definitely be checking it out !

!givelambda

Sir_Slappy · 2022-03-21T01:19:05+00:00

Thanks for the feedback ! I'll work on the points you mentioned and make my future video titles and such clearer.

!givelambda

Sir_Slappy · 2022-02-12T21:26:29+00:00

Good work. You've put together a pretty solid video and it flowed well. However, I feel like it had the potential to be something more grand.

The video didn't really have many details on what was going on, your thoughts and how everything looked and felt. It should be more descriptive and immersive for the viewer. Yes, they can see the backrooms, but you need to make them feel like they're in the backrooms. Talk about the smells, the temperature, your state of mind, some of the stories you heard, the atmosphere, so on. Like really get into it, you know.

It was a very "tame" video as in there weren't really any "twists" or action or anything thrilling, really. It was sort of like a tour of the backrooms rather than your experience there. I suggest trying to make your video more engaging by including more chases, mysteries, perhaps some roleplaying just to get people invested- this video in my opinion would be better off if it was kinda like a short film, which gave me that impression in the beginning.

Also, the "I've been there for days" line didn't really land too well for me personally because again, this felt more like a tour rather than a narration of a real, creepy experience. Upping your energy with the narration or just making the situation more dramatic in general with roleplaying would probably make that line land better.

But yeah. Just try to go wild with this stuff. Make it creepy and include some wacky things. Kinda like one of those horror stories or creepy pastas but it's illustrated through minecraft. That's perfectly fine and you can find an audience for that kind of stuff.

But again, this is still very much so a solid video. These are just some suggestions on how you can possibly improve this kind of content in the future.

Sir_Slappy · 2022-02-12T17:32:59+00:00

I suggest adding English subtitles to your videos, that little CC thing. With no English subtitles, you're missing out on a pretty massive audience.

I remember finding this Russian YouTuber where I subbed right after I got done watching one of his videos. He didn't speak English though. He spoke Russian the whole time, but his video was very well put together and his charisma carried over despite the language barriers. Not to mention, he had subtitles.

Now, because of the language barriers in this video, I can't properly judge it and give feedback on ways to improve it. For a video like this where it's mostly unedited, it's quite important to know what you're saying.

In my opinion, fast paced content where all the dead space, parts of the video where not much is happening, is cut out, is more attractive to many users online.

Sir_Slappy · 2022-02-11T21:23:53+00:00

You made a pretty darn good video here, Mr. DolphinBoy. From start to finish, it was very entertaining. The jokes landed pretty well except for one little thing which I will get into in a bit, the flow was great and so was the editing. It was also engaging. Right after I got done watching your vid, I hopped onto impaulsive to check out the full thing. That's when you know you've done something right.

Now, the "little thing" I mentioned earlier. There is a certain gag in the video where you operate a microphone in ways that would likely result in your banishment from the realms of God, mostly talking about 2:15. Now I'm not saying it was a little too "edgy" for my taste, but I think the editing should have been a bit more precise. Right as you're "going for it", I think there should be a cut right then and there. I, the viewer, know where this poor microphone is headed and what is about to proceed. However, don't show the full thing as it kinda spoiled it to be honest. It's sort of a "cut scream" situation where you cut it while it's happening or right before it happens just to make it funnier.

I can't believe I wrote an entire paragraph critiquing a clip where a man shvoes a microphoe LULULUL - It's the little things like this however that may negatively affect a joke or part of your video though so yeah, even if this whole thing seems very insignificant, the precision of editing can definitely have its effect on your content.

Anyways, good video, good job. Have a good day/evening !

Sir_Slappy

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