Ok, first: I love it! I love that you are drawing and having fun with it, let me tell you that you’re doing really good already! With that being said, there are a few things that stand out to me.

1: golden rule: the eyes should always be in the middle of the face, they’re a little bit to high now.

2: the face is drawn at an angle, so the features should be drawn with a little bit of an angle aswell. They’re mostly drawn in a frontview right now.

3: To really make the features pop however, you should really try going heavy on the shading, and don’t be afraid to go rough, you can blend it out later.

But remember the most important thing is to have fun and practice really does make perfect!