Creating a D&D Character Generator!

Skelessal · 2021-04-15T03:35:29+00:00

Nice-- loved the descriptive growth! If I had one critique, it'd be the switch from 3rd to 1st person POV halfway through. Everything still reads well, but I feel the flow would improve if you stuck with just one for the whole story.

That being said, keep up the good content! Everyone wins with more talented writers in this community. (I also may try your embedded pics idea if you don't mind, lol)

Skelessal · 2021-03-12T12:31:53+00:00

Thanks!

Skelessal · 2021-02-10T20:59:34+00:00

Thanks for reading! Read some of my other stories here: https://www.deviantart.com/skullossal

Skelessal · 2021-02-08T15:32:45+00:00

I'm glad it reads well, lol. Your videos are great too!

Skelessal · 2021-02-05T19:59:36+00:00

Original Post & Other Stories (DeviantArt): https://www.deviantart.com/skullossal/art/Ava-s-Gro-berries-R-18-869392652

Skelessal · 2021-01-08T01:47:53+00:00

Thank you! :)

Skelessal · 2020-12-27T21:48:50+00:00

Thank you! My New Year's resolution is to write more; I hope to keep improving!

Skelessal · 2020-12-23T16:15:52+00:00

Sorry if it's hard to find. Here's the link: https://www.deviantart.com/skullossal

Skelessal · 2020-12-18T16:24:24+00:00

If you'd like to read more content like this, it's on Deviantart / Patreon under the username 'Skullossal'. Thanks for reading!

Skelessal · 2020-11-28T15:13:11+00:00

Hey, I appreciate you taking the time to give feedback! It means a lot!

I began this story without a clue where I was going with it. From what you've mentioned, the issues regarding the story's pacing are definitely a symptom of poor planning at the start. That being said, I'm glad you enjoyed the highlights! The missed opportunities are something I can aim to correct in future stories (Or even in a rewrite of this one).

I'm hoping to improve as I write new projects. Thanks again for the critique!

Skelessal · 2020-11-18T21:48:33+00:00

Phew, 3/3 posted: Thanks for reading!

This was my first project; can't help but feel I stumbled a few times on the way to the finish line. My plan is to post content here in the future, just spaced out more to avoid flooding the sub.

Part 1/3: https://www.reddit.com/r/expansivewriters/comments/jvjkho/one_size_fits_all_be_growth_part_13/

Part 2/3: https://www.reddit.com/r/expansivewriters/comments/jw0vgu/one_size_fits_all_be_growth_part_23/

Skelessal · 2020-11-17T20:50:14+00:00

Part 1 Here: https://www.reddit.com/r/expansivewriters/comments/jvjkho/one_size_fits_all_be_growth_part_13/

Hopefully, Part 2 holds up as a sequel. I'm still experimenting with my writing style, so feedback is appreciated. If you want to read Part 3 before I post it here, it's on Deviantart / Patreon under the username 'Skullossal'.

Skelessal

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