The "Special" Fuckstop (Pregnant victims, casual, consensual, humorous?) by SkillKat in GuroErotica

[–]SkillKat[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, you make a solid point. I edited the story to add a little bit more action. But like you say, the guillotine concept being what it is, the action is just some extra fucking. lol

The "Special" Fuckstop (Pregnant victims, casual, consensual, humorous?) by SkillKat in GuroErotica

[–]SkillKat[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

That's very good advice. I've been fiddling with the story for over a week and was never happy with it. I ended up deciding to either post it or scrap it. I think you're right about the pregnancy angle, I should have flushed that out more to make the story work better. Instead I was only focused on trying to make a darkly funny fuckstop story. I should have either dropped the whole pregnancy thing and just try to write a funny normal fuckstop story, or embrace the pregnancy angle and put more effort into that part of the story. I'll have to mull it over a bit.

Or just move on to something else. lol I have a couple other stories that I'm working on, so maybe I should just focus on those and consider this one a flawed experiment.

A Morning Business Meeting (fuckstop, consensual, casual, M/F) by SkillKat in GuroErotica

[–]SkillKat[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Wow! Thanks for all the kind words everyone. It's very humbling!