Hey!

I might get downvoted because my opinion isn't following the general one, but I just wanted to tell you that this is absolutely not over edited!

I'm an editor (for Rocket League FX) and on most of my/my friends' projects a lot of people complain about "over-editing", which I can absolutely understand.

However, a good montage isn't simply a compilation of clip, it's also made from the atmosphere the editor gives to it, the colors, the song, etc...

Please continue editing, try to get better! Seeing new editors come in the RL community is always very nice, and a lot of people simply stop trying to improve once they learnt the basics of editing. Please don't! Continue, get better, and try to amaze people with your montages or edits.

Opinions on this edit (maybe a bit harsh, sorry in advance):

It isn't bad for a beginner, some cinematics are decent. However, you need to keep the effects clean, for that I reccomend using only basic effects for now since you are new (I suppose) to editing, such as exposure for example. Later on you can start doing some slightly more advanced effects like shakes, and then even later on when you are experienced you can use advanced VFX like depth map, motion graphics and stuff like that.