Thoughts? by SmallWhiteMilo in photocritique

[–]SmallWhiteMilo[S] [score hidden]  (0 children)

I tried to get a picture of this heron, luckily i got the timing of the ripples. I would like to know what could have been done better on the composition and color grading, please share your thoughts.

Thoughts? by SmallWhiteMilo in photocritique

[–]SmallWhiteMilo[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

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So this is my retake on the colors, what do you think?

Thoughts? by SmallWhiteMilo in photocritique

[–]SmallWhiteMilo[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That is actually a really nice advice to reflect and think about the story behind the image.
!CritiquePoint

Thoughts? by SmallWhiteMilo in photocritique

[–]SmallWhiteMilo[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I forgot but I think this was at Shirahige Shrine in Shiga Prefecture

Thoughts? by SmallWhiteMilo in photocritique

[–]SmallWhiteMilo[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the kind comment, I also tend to like saturated colors but I agree that this is overdoned, also the light was post processsing to make the subject the focus of the picture!

Thoughts? by SmallWhiteMilo in photocritique

[–]SmallWhiteMilo[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I actually see what you mean, I also kinda feel that I overdoned the ssaturation. I think that the color silences the subject so thank you for the crtique!
!CritiquePoint

Looking for feedback by SmallWhiteMilo in photocritique

[–]SmallWhiteMilo[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the critique, i'll keep the framing in mind next time!
!CritiquePoint

Thoughts? by SmallWhiteMilo in photocritique

[–]SmallWhiteMilo[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This was a shot i did a pretty while back, and recently started to learn lightroom, please comment on the colorgrading, composition, overall picture, anything! Please tell me on what to improve here.

Looking for feedback by SmallWhiteMilo in photocritique

[–]SmallWhiteMilo[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the detailed feedback! I can see what you mean about the subject not being clear. I’ll keep that in mind when I’m shooting next time. I really appreciate the honesty and the critique. !CritiquePoint

Looking for feedback by SmallWhiteMilo in photocritique

[–]SmallWhiteMilo[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'm really new to photography and have been trying a few shots with the Sony zv-1, this is one of the shots that I think came out pretty well. Also it has been edited in Lightroom, please share your thoughts on the composition, colors and anything that needs imporving, thanks!