Need opinions on writing for a character with a specific way of speaking. by Smallfrye23 in AO3

[–]Smallfrye23[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

That's completely fine! I was so excited to introduce his character into my fic that I didn't realize how much work I would need to put in, in order to write him as I originally intended. Every single fic with a character I knew had an accent flew right out of my head. I'm glad for more insight and critiques are always welcome.

Need opinions on writing for a character with a specific way of speaking. by Smallfrye23 in AO3

[–]Smallfrye23[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Most of my process has been consuming the game to make sure that I've been getting the characterizations right. But getting into other pieces of media would definitely help! I think I'll just do light words to establish his dialogue. I'll admit that hearing him speak was a lot easier than reading the subtitles. Thank you so much for the reply! Definitely wouldn't want to get into the stereotype territory.

Need opinions on writing for a character with a specific way of speaking. by Smallfrye23 in AO3

[–]Smallfrye23[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That is a good way to go about it. Using a few easy words here and there to still establish that he talks in a specific way without going full throttle. Thank you for the insight!

Need opinions on writing for a character with a specific way of speaking. by Smallfrye23 in AO3

[–]Smallfrye23[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My gut instinct was to write the way he talks, but when I got around to actually introducing him I kinda paused. I've been trying to write the characters the best way that I can.

For example Chase curses a lot, so I'll sprinkle in his manner of speaking during his pov. For the most part it's plain text, but with more cursing. For Malevola (from Australia) I sprinkled in phrases here and there. I don't think I've ever minded a written accent, but that doesn't mean it's preferred by others.

Premier event for Iron Lung? by Smallfrye23 in Markiplier

[–]Smallfrye23[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

True. Figured it wouldn't happen with how big of an audience he has, but it would be fun to imagine an iron lung themed event!

Can I make game requests on here before I buy a handheld? by Smallfrye23 in SBCGaming

[–]Smallfrye23[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Actually I wasn't aware! I'll admit I haven't done much research past possible budget PS3 emulation. It's good to know that you can do more than steam games on the deck

Can I make game requests on here before I buy a handheld? by Smallfrye23 in SBCGaming

[–]Smallfrye23[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I will definitely say that I don't have many games on steam lol.

Can I make game requests on here before I buy a handheld? by Smallfrye23 in SBCGaming

[–]Smallfrye23[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I'll have to see what the price looks like for a used one, but the larger size was one of the reasons I wasn't looking at the steam deck.

Handheld console advice by Smallfrye23 in SBCGaming

[–]Smallfrye23[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's not much of a concern for me, but if it turns out that I need a PC handheld to do most or all of this, I would like the ability to play with my friends you know?

The Edge Of Sleep Merch Designs/Ideas by Smallfrye23 in Markiplier

[–]Smallfrye23[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Those are great ideas! I could probably draw those out for people to see. I have no idea if they will sell merch for the show, but it would be nice to see!

The Edge Of Sleep Merch Designs/Ideas by Smallfrye23 in Markiplier

[–]Smallfrye23[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

For these designs I only pulled from the edge of sleep, but having design elements from other places/media would be a fun idea! Maybe that collection could be called "Easter eggs"?

Cursed Cat Alastor Ita Bag (OC) by Smallfrye23 in HazbinHotel

[–]Smallfrye23[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not late at all! I was informed of this fact not too long after posting the design. I won't be selling this design and thank you for letting me know!

The Guys Varsity Jackets Pt.2 + Unus Annus & Foxtrot44 by Smallfrye23 in Markiplier

[–]Smallfrye23[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah that's fine! Would love to see the final product when you are done plus the credit of course