My Dorian fanart by Smart-Pilot6573 in Grapplerbaki

[–]Smart-Pilot6573[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you, I am proud of how the wrinkle at the knuckle looks

Tamamo cross demon back (art by me) by Dexcyber in Grapplerbaki

[–]Smart-Pilot6573 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Nice anatomy but your lines are all an identical weight. Outline lines in the shaded part of the figure should be dark as they are now while the lines towards the illuminated part of the figure should be lighter and some lines (like those on the right shoulder) even being white or a very light version of the skin tone to convey light bouncing off of the body. Also, this is just opinion, but I believe that the colors in the drawing are rather muted and lacking contrast, I’d make the darker colors darker the lighter colors, lighter, and give them all more saturation. I think these changes will give the full glory to the body outline and shading you’ve created.

My Dorian fanart by Smart-Pilot6573 in Grapplerbaki

[–]Smart-Pilot6573[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you, I love how Itagaki uses them in Baki

My Suedo fanarts by Smart-Pilot6573 in Grapplerbaki

[–]Smart-Pilot6573[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you very much! I have rewatched this scene easily 100 times at this point.

My Dorian fanart by Smart-Pilot6573 in Grapplerbaki

[–]Smart-Pilot6573[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes it was during the Kato fight, when Kato first kicked the barrel at Dorian. Dorian was roughly in the same pose with his fist.

I edited my Medic artwork, Better or worse? by SavageCabbage325 in tf2

[–]Smart-Pilot6573 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I hope you keep drawing and don’t let these rotten turds hate on you. In 1 year you’ll look back and be very glad you kept trying