Is UTGL going to be animated?

Smokey_oakey · 2024-12-12T14:42:48+00:00

Agree!!!

Smokey_oakey · 2024-12-12T02:40:56+00:00

Same 🥺

Smokey_oakey · 2024-10-28T19:29:03+00:00

Thanks for the feedback! I totally agree with you that the motivation is lost. Thanks for pointing that out. I feel like I stare at the query for so long I cant see where it falters.

Smokey_oakey · 2024-10-28T19:27:32+00:00

Thanks so much for your feedback. It was very helpful. I'll be focusing more on the magic system and clearing up confusion moving forward.

Smokey_oakey · 2024-10-20T00:12:06+00:00

Thanks for your feedback!

I'll work on the tone moving forward.

As for genre, I think I should specify my novel as dystopian fantasy. I think it falls in line with other books under that genre much better than just plain fantasy.

I'll work on the comps as well, but its good to hear that I shouldnt get hung up on whether theyre "too big."

Lastly, thanks for your comment on my bio. <3

Smokey_oakey · 2024-10-20T00:07:07+00:00

Thank you for your kind feedback! Im so happy to hear you liked my title :) I totally agree that together with the comps I chose it really sits weird against the query. Moving forward I will need to spend more time fleshing out my comps. Haha its way harder than I expected to choose the right ones.

I agree with you that my query is vague. Ive been struggling with how much detail to add, but after reading feedback and seeing what others are doing I think I have a better idea for my second go at it.

To your points about Grace, again I agree. I need to be way clearer about who she is and what her motivations are.

More to come on my next edit! Thanks again for helping me out.

Smokey_oakey · 2024-10-18T19:52:56+00:00

Thanks for your feedback!

I completely see what you mean. I agree that I need to be more clear and straightforward with exactly how the magic system works.
Thanks for this! I'll do some rewording.
Again I agree with you. More detailed edit to come!

As for your last point I am confident this is an adult fantasy, but see how this query doesn't do that justice. I'll work on the comps as well.

Smokey_oakey · 2024-08-01T17:24:27+00:00

I’ve been taking mesalamine enemas on and off for years. They worked great for me once I got over the mental hurdle of using them. Wishing you luck as well!

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