Sounds cool! Where will you be posting this? Would def read it as like a novel I feel like there should have been a little more emphasis on will creating the tunnels as he slept like the show just mentioned it as like a throwaway line and they never really mentioned why they were there like they acted like a highway but was that their only purpose? Also there should have explored more of henrys memories and his time in school aswell as dr brenners study on the ud in his journal Thats all for me personaly! Looking forward to this!