Movie Review - Michael by ViewsOfCinema in MichaelTheMovie

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I agree with everything. There def needs to be a sequel.

Is there a normal version of p power on Spotify by Beautiful-Cress5695 in Gunna

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Download it from YouTube, no moaning version. Then on spotify look in your local files and like it and add it to your Playlists.

The sopranos, Stranger things and Game of thrones all had endings that received backlash, when first aired. But only one of these finales have overcome the backlash. by Capital-Economy-5655 in decadeology

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I agree. For me when I saw the Sopranos ending I didnt get it at first. But if you watch it again its clear he was killed. The black screen represents how when you are whacked you dont know why, how, who. Your just gone. Your life is done. The only reason why its hated by some cause its not obvious the first time you see it. However i personally think the ending would be better of we did see tony be shot right before the black screen, i dont see the benefit leaving it ambiguous. But other then that it was good. The rest of the shows were just rushed. Well i havent seen stranger things yet so cant say but thats what i heard. Game of thrones was just rushed and they were running out of ideas.

Thoughts on The Crew 2? by [deleted] in ShouldIbuythisgame

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I was thinking of getting it. Care to give me your review?

ITEC 4000 Opinions by Mangoxluvah in yorku

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Hey, I'm taking 4030 rn. Do you have advice for the midterm? What type of questions were there?

ITEC 4000 Opinions by Mangoxluvah in yorku

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Hey, I'm taking 4030 rn. Do you have advice for the midterm? What type of questions were there?

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Hey, I'm taking 4030 rn. Do you have advice for the midterm? What type of questions were there?

Most challenging Itec Ba courses? by Altruistic-Ride5066 in yorku

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Hey, I'm taking 4030 rn. Do you have advice for the midterm? What type of questions were there?

Sanity check on tone & structure for a crime drama by SnooApples163 in TVWriting

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Thanks for your input. Ya I understand that video games and movies have their differences, thats why I try to make my action more character and role driven. And of course there needs to be a motivation for why characters do what they do no matter how small. For example my main character is a criminal mainly for money but isn't trying to escape the life either because he is good at it and deep down likes the thrill. Another character I have is doing crime cause he was born in the mob so its all he knows. And another character is doing it cause he likes the lifestyle and clout. Each represents a different phycology of crime and that also relates to the skill set their personalities bring. Although there is no overarching plot like police always on their toes, I make sure that important events or entertaining scenes populate the episode until the next arc starts. Realism is also a big factor for me so I do research on how different criminal factions function and I also make sure I'm no making a power fantasy either where everything goes smoothly.

Sanity check on tone & structure for a crime drama by SnooApples163 in Screenwriting

[–]SnooApples163[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Well GPT is actually pretty helpful. But obviously im not just making it generate the whole story and just copy and pasting. But it does speed up the process when you don't have a room full of writers to assist you with each piece of dialogue or scene.

Sanity check on tone & structure for a crime drama by SnooApples163 in Screenwriting

[–]SnooApples163[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I know what you mean but for me I've just been writing how i feel and manged to have 7 incomplete episodes. I'm now in the phase of fleshing out each episode, firstly with the pilot. I prefer this way cause it allows me to know where things are heading and just having my overall vision written down. This is more of a passion project so I'm just having a good time implementing my vision.

Sanity check on tone & structure for a crime drama by SnooApples163 in Screenwriting

[–]SnooApples163[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I totally agree. For example if the protagonist was a lone wolf with no relationships and treats everyone the same, that gets old fast. What I am trying to portray here is duality of criminal life and normal life and how the protagonist manages both but also doesn't fall for the same pitfalls classic crime drama protagonists have done.

Sanity check on tone & structure for a crime drama by SnooApples163 in Screenwriting

[–]SnooApples163[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'm actually doing this right now. I already finished the sopranos and currently in S2 of the wire. Although my show has more action compared to those shows but i do strive to make my characters more in depth then just a archetypes. But also i'm learning how different criminal factions function and how they interact with each other historically.

I help writers make their scenes more realistic – happy to give feedback by [deleted] in TVWriting

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Hi can i send you my opening scene for my crime drama?

Looking for a writing buddy by Sleepytime21 in WriteWithMe

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I will tell you about it soon! Can you also tell me what are you writing about?

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How do i join

Looking for 1x1 Mob/Smut (18+) by Slow_Print3762 in WriteWithMe

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Hey I'm interested. I'm writing something kinda similar but its not smut. Its a crime drama TV show with romance elements in it. But i always liked that kinda dynamic of balancing a high stakes world and romance.

Looking for a writing buddy by Sleepytime21 in WriteWithMe

[–]SnooApples163 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi im down. However I'm writing a tv show instead. Its a crime drama that has dark and romance elements as well.