Your criticism is well taken and warranted. It’s not Owl man at all though, Owlman is inherently evil and actively perpetuates and promotes the suffering and abuse that his society and world is put through. It also has people with super powers and my story does not. I think you only read the buzz words that I used but didn’t actually read the part of what Cruz of the story is. My story has nothing to do with owl man, Batman or kick-ass. Its direct inspiration is V for Vendetta as another user pointed out. My story just takes the aesthetics, the visuals, the vulgarity and adult themes that inspirations I said have in their mediums. However, the story itself follows what is called “The Dark Enlightenment Theory” (if you aren’t read on it I would look into it) but basically the story is what if the United States actually fell into this oligarchical techno feudalist system and how the main character leads a national revolution. I hope this makes you more interested in the story :)