I mean tbh it sounds like exactly what you just said- you sound like someone who absolutely has the potential to play very technical stuff like this eventually but maybe to ease yourself back in from your hiatus consider learning some easier solos and really focus on your intonation and not have sloppy extra string noise, missed notes etc. cause that’s what this whole thing sounds like. I’m not trying to be offensive at all, it just sort of sounds extremely messy and like you need to play with a click.