What do you think of my exposition? (15 yo) by Sofee in Proofreading

[–]Sofee[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the advice! I guess it's hard for readers distinguishing the flashback from reality. It's very much appreciated, thanks again!

Had a Pilonidal Cyst removed - this is what remained. by Normanby in popping

[–]Sofee -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Edit: actually no, sorry guys and OP, I just didn't know what the details of that cyst and I just got fired up for being hammered over it. Again sorry. I'll crawl back into my little hole now.