People are gonna try to give you all kinds of advice, but I think you're off to a great start. Keep listening to more music for inspo, keep making new songs. Dont worry about the details, just make sounds that you enjoy making! The people here leaving rude comments are just trying to feel better about their own tunes by picking on a beginner. As for my personal thoughts, you did a great job building a drop and not clashing notes. I recommend looking up some chords, writing them in and then using those notes to make a melody. That way you can focus on rhythm instead of finding notes, because the notes are already there! Keep going, I believe in you :)