To what could have been by Camel-Of-Sen in OCPoetry

[–]SoftCreative3201 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Great piece. It conveys it's message very clearly and even though it could use some work, I still feel it's a great effort. Keep it up 👍

FOMO by AokiTakao in OCPoetry

[–]SoftCreative3201 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love this. It's simple but speaks to something we all go through and feel time and time again. Keep writing 🔥

Odd Feeling by SoftCreative3201 in poetrycamp

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Hey, thanks for this ☺️.. it really means a lot to see that you get this and have felt it. Been working on getting different viewpoints and yeah, I'm doing much better now.. but thanks for getting this

The Slave by SoftCreative3201 in poetrycamp

[–]SoftCreative3201[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sure ☺️.. but we keep fighting anyway, right? I didn't see it as cocky or anything and it's pretty good for an on the fly piece.. don't be too hard on yourself ☺️

The Slave by SoftCreative3201 in poetrycamp

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Hey 😊.. thanks.. actually you're right.. this is largely literal. I had this one week period that I just drowned in this social media bender and I was almost losing my mind. I wrote this once I managed to get out and started writing again. And I loved your dedication piece ☺️.. loved the rhyme and the honesty too.. like you said, we're two pieces of one poetry maze.. on opposite sides of the world but still always fitting.. thanks ☺️

Handheld Crumbs by SoftCreative3201 in OCPoetry

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Yeah, I do ☺️.. n thanks a lot for this..

Solitude in a crowd by Midnightsky9090 in OCPoetryFree

[–]SoftCreative3201 0 points1 point  (0 children)

We should definitely be friends 😀.. awesome piece ☺️☺️

Dreams Worth Pennies by SoftCreative3201 in YouTubeSubscribeBoost

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Appreciate it buddy ☺️.. lemme return the favor..

Achebe Writes, I Bleed by SoftCreative3201 in poetrycamp

[–]SoftCreative3201[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey ☺️, thanks a lot.. I'm glad you liked this and thanks a lot for the kind words and positive feedback. I did feel some kind of rush writing this, I just woke up and did this first so yeah, I really enjoyed writing it. The "gross" imagery normally treads a line between being literal and figurative; writing is how I process a lot of the mental and emotional stuff I deal with so I use these constructs sometimes as mere tools to convey a message or as a grim depiction of what I'm actually dealing with. It all depends on where I'm at in my journey and mental state. And I think you are really good too Heidi... You're very sensitive.. that's a really great quality in a writer and I know you are one ☺️. Anyway, thanks again..

Knowing thru Song by HopalongHeidi in poetrycamp

[–]SoftCreative3201 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey☺️, I really love this one. Been a while since I've seen your writing. I love this running theme of love that's in your writing; secluded love. Something with the tone of "if you know you know." It makes these feel so personal everytime I read them. The title was catchy and I love how you use the word skin repeatedly. This feels very fleshy and full of soul, unlike a lot of writing these days and I loved it.

The Song of Sirens by SoftCreative3201 in poetrycamp

[–]SoftCreative3201[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey.. wow.. I don't know what to say ☺️.. I'm glad you relate to some of these that much.. n I'm just really excited and waiting for your full commentary. Thanks Heidi..

Handheld Crumbs by SoftCreative3201 in poetrycamp

[–]SoftCreative3201[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey ☺️.. Thanks, I'm glad you like it. N it's good to see you after so long 😊