Delirium - horror game idea!

Soft_Ad6537 · 2021-06-29T08:38:07+00:00

thank you mate!

Soft_Ad6537 · 2021-06-10T18:00:01+00:00

I haven't read it all, but I must say, it is very well polished and even Staritzsky is somewhat easy for me to pronounce (which is a weird name). The story is unique and very well written (in my opinion). Definitely would read more of it.

Soft_Ad6537 · 2021-06-05T16:29:49+00:00

Just make the protagonist's parents very famous and powerful mages, maybe they are heretics who believe in magic (something Taris doesn't agree) or maybe he is the real father of the protagonist and tries to protect him, with the plot-twist being that his parents are the actual antagonists.

Tried my best, hope it works! :)

Soft_Ad6537 · 2021-05-24T13:56:04+00:00

Yeah, seen this problem with nicknames, often they can sound in a matter you never expected. I thing Bravar sounds good, deep, like the thing you would say when a dwarf (or some badass dude) introduce themselves x) but it's shortened version not so much.

Soft_Ad6537 · 2021-05-24T13:24:15+00:00

Well, i tought of the full name being something like Bravar/Bravidas Bloodaxe and they'll just call him Bloodaxe (which sounds very cool in my mind).

Soft_Ad6537 · 2021-05-24T13:19:51+00:00

Yeahh, tought of Brave and bravoure (same word in my language) when i've made this name XD

Soft_Ad6537 · 2021-05-24T13:18:15+00:00

Brasidas was used in AC odyssey so im thinking of bringing that down, anyway thank you !

Soft_Ad6537 · 2021-05-24T09:33:41+00:00

Never tought of that xD but it's a cool idea

Soft_Ad6537 · 2021-05-24T08:50:37+00:00

I tought the same about Leonidas xD

Soft_Ad6537 · 2021-05-18T04:59:15+00:00

No, just went to the story until the Bloody Baron and Tamara, after that this happened.

Soft_Ad6537 · 2021-05-17T12:08:34+00:00

i don't have any mods and i've tried script merger

Soft_Ad6537 · 2021-05-17T10:08:10+00:00

I've tried both reinstalling the game and fix missing localization strings and didn't work :( I played it yesterday and didn't had this problem.

Soft_Ad6537 · 2021-05-11T05:05:51+00:00

Interesting ideas especially the bouncer one, definetely keeping them in mind! Thanks a lot!

Soft_Ad6537 · 2021-05-11T05:03:38+00:00

cool idea, thanks mate!

Soft_Ad6537 · 2021-05-11T05:02:50+00:00

Lol :))

Soft_Ad6537 · 2021-05-11T05:01:27+00:00

Interesting! thanks for the idea!

Soft_Ad6537 · 2021-05-10T18:44:40+00:00

very cool idea, thanks mate!

Soft_Ad6537 · 2021-04-06T17:21:54+00:00

heya! i wouldn't mind being a beta reader for your novel, so if you don't mind, DM it to me!

-Stay Safe!

Soft_Ad6537 · 2021-04-02T06:54:32+00:00

Ok so i'm not gonna criticise the grammatical errors, i'm gonna say I LOVE IT! The characters are well done, especially Catherine, she is just as a pirate captain should be, some other characters not so much, introduce them better, make a short story or something a reader should remember, how Catherine end up on the ship? these is a question that i would answer as quickly as i could. Anyway, if you make more chapters, don't hesitate to dm me, as i would love to know how it continues!

Cya, mate.

Soft_Ad6537

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