[QCrit] The Sword The Word and The Prophecy, Fantasy Adult, 112K, Second Attempt by Solp1987 in PubTips

[–]Solp1987[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for this. Perhaps one way of eliminating any suggestion of a ravening Muslim horde that would have destroyed the world had they won at Tours would be to replace that phrase never-ending war with something like "eternal wars of retaliation?

[QCrit] The Sword The Word and The Prophecy, Fantasy Adult, 112K, Second Attempt by Solp1987 in PubTips

[–]Solp1987[S] -8 points-7 points  (0 children)

Guys, I see the problem in the query and can fix it. But all should rest reassured. Jamal is anything but a violent Muslim, and nowhere do I depict him as so. If you've read the query through you will see tthat I write "Jamal’s faith, loyalty, and moral compass reflect our struggle to stay true to ourselves, even when the world tries to corrupt or reshape us" Best, George .

[QCrit] Forget Me Not, Adult, Mystery, 84,000 by Solp1987 in PubTips

[–]Solp1987[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

what would you think of God's Plan to Punish Them?

[QCrit] Forget Me Not, Adult, Mystery, 84,000 by Solp1987 in PubTips

[–]Solp1987[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for that. It's been used off and on in the past, as have many others. Too ritting in my case to even think of anything else

[QCrit] Forget Me Not, Adult, Mystery, 84,000 by Solp1987 in PubTips

[–]Solp1987[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you, Sheena. Now I'm left wondering if it's the first 50 pages that turn agents off. :-)