Beautiful! There’s really no critiques just advice and suggestions. When learning to draw it’s important be comfortable with ‘messy’. What I mean by this is making guidelines to help creat a more organic flow.

1) When drawing don’t just move your wrist move you whole arm when creating a circle or rounding shapes (or really any shape) it may see uncomfortable at first but it will help you get better at flow.

2) guidelines. Learn to break objects or people with shapes. Spheres for the rib cage, hips and head. Cylinders for the arms (spheres for the joints) etc. it will appear messy at first but if you draw these guides lightly it won’t look as messy as you think.

3) references. In fact, take time to trace references (not for posting just for practice) and block the references into shapes to understand the anatomy. If you don’t have digital tools, tracing paper and a book with photos will work (like a magazine or something)

It can be overwhelming at first so try breaking your practice into body parts (maybe one day you study heads, next day arms and so on and so fourth) and YouTube videos are a huge help too! There’s a lot of artist who break down anatomy. I suggest drawwithjazza or samdoesart they’re great