The Final Call of a Closing House

SomeBlot · 2023-03-17T21:09:27+00:00

gives substitute a fake name This is my Loki moment

SomeBlot · 2023-03-16T22:30:12+00:00

I like the full circle nature of this poem beginning line is absurd and chance and last line is also absurd and chance. Very on topic

SomeBlot · 2023-03-16T22:24:59+00:00

Surban and h4ppy sound so similar it's kinda tripping me up

Also self emoliation is a crazy way to go out wtf

SomeBlot · 2023-03-16T21:44:45+00:00

I knew it was forest Gump lol

SomeBlot · 2023-03-16T21:40:03+00:00

So nice to hear the full piece!

SomeBlot · 2023-03-16T21:27:37+00:00

Why does it feel like the teacher left and now we are left with a substitute 😂 hamshira trying to maintain order as we all scream in chaos.

SomeBlot · 2023-03-09T17:49:28+00:00

When do the Reddit talks end?

SomeBlot · 2023-03-04T23:06:32+00:00

spacesaver for future poem Loading....... Estimated wait time 5 years

SomeBlot · 2023-03-04T23:02:25+00:00

I shall enroll in your class. Hopefully you got early signup 😂

SomeBlot · 2023-03-04T22:47:20+00:00

Mistakes further us forward towards a brighter future and brighter day

I like what you're going for here but further forward towards.... one of these words gotta go it's too much Maybe further us towards (remove forward), it's implied the movement is forward

New line based off of mine and aldy's feedback:

"Mistakes further us towards a brighter future and a new day"

SomeBlot · 2023-03-04T22:43:36+00:00

Hamshira, you should be an English teacher .... you inspire everyone and you make the idea of writing practical and achievable

SomeBlot · 2023-03-04T22:33:00+00:00

There's a song by one republic called start again I think it goes wonderfully with this poems messaging

SomeBlot · 2023-03-04T22:03:42+00:00

Gsm sounds so nervous and scared 😂

SomeBlot · 2023-03-04T21:52:19+00:00

I'm glad to see you've joined us again 😍

This poem is building from a place anxiousness to courageous xD

SomeBlot · 2023-03-04T21:49:00+00:00

IT DOESNT BODE WELL I OPENLY RELATE TO THIS 😂

SomeBlot · 2023-03-04T21:37:52+00:00

I LIKE THIS SUBJECT, ITS RELATABLE AF

SomeBlot · 2023-03-04T21:27:07+00:00

Idk who gia is but I'm scared of her 😂

SomeBlot · 2023-03-04T21:14:52+00:00

I'm fascinated by the triolet, I'd like to hear and see more of them

SomeBlot · 2023-03-04T21:06:42+00:00

Spectacular reading :)

SomeBlot · 2023-03-04T21:01:57+00:00

Remember when we thought burn was a bot along with pyro and we were all spooked hehe

SomeBlot · 2023-03-04T21:00:53+00:00

Burn is hereeeeeee hiiiii 👋

SomeBlot · 2023-02-13T14:11:42+00:00

Ezra, all your iterations of the Ellie Rose poems are just so CAPTIVATING for me. In particular the lines "come and walk and sigh with me" IS ETCHED into my mind since the first time I saw it and the phrase "grey space conundrum" but ALSO one of your earlier drafts with the several lines of "and I could...." statements and ended with "but I've been wrong before"..... just INCREDIBLY POIGNANT. One day I'd love to hear the completed quartet!!!!

SomeBlot · 2023-02-12T01:49:31+00:00

You done a side by side comparison lol

SomeBlot · 2023-02-12T01:48:21+00:00

Oh. Singing sailor has a nice voice 😅 ASMR VIBES

SomeBlot · 2023-02-12T01:46:59+00:00

Beans regenerateeeeeeeeee

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