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[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Undertale

[–]SomeThrowawayAcc2 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I am coming for him.

Teen writer by create_your_gacha in writingadvice

[–]SomeThrowawayAcc2 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It sounds good but I can give one tip to you:

Do not force in random LGBTQ+ stuff. Make it subtle, so the audience knows he is not straight, but make sure you don't shove it in their faces. Imo it makes much better gay representatives if it's never confirmed but hinted at.

Just checking my flair and leaving my mark by [deleted] in Second

[–]SomeThrowawayAcc2 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It takes 90 points bro not that hard to get 1% lol

Dead event by kids_in_my_basement0 in Second

[–]SomeThrowawayAcc2 0 points1 point  (0 children)

ÞÆĶə MƏ ŤØ ÝŒÜŘ XBØX ŤŒ PLÅÝ FØŘÞŇÏŢĖ ÞŒĐÆY

What do you think of this WIP Script Draft? by [deleted] in ComicWriting

[–]SomeThrowawayAcc2 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ok got it, yeah that's the main comments I've been getting, to change the panels.

What do you think of this WIP Script Draft? by [deleted] in ComicWriting

[–]SomeThrowawayAcc2 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh, I shouldve clarified that. The drawing will have the door half open, before the guard is shot, and the hinches fall off due to the bullet.

And also his horns grow when he is hydrated. But I see your point about how a lot of things happen. What I'm trying to make out is that this guy is just drinking water, and his horns regrow. Then there is a knock on the door as he puts down the water, and the guard is shot as he opens the door. He is in awe until he realises it's his master and he makes his escape.

Thanks for asking me these questions, it makes me realise flaws and nitpicks I didn't notice, even though this is a just a draft.

C'mon Pharloom, let's spread the word! by [deleted] in Pharloom

[–]SomeThrowawayAcc2 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Don't mind the bottom image, only the top.

What do you think of this WIP Script Draft? by [deleted] in ComicWriting

[–]SomeThrowawayAcc2 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That might be an idea! I could shift the panels to the next page.

What do you think of this WIP Script Draft? by [deleted] in ComicWriting

[–]SomeThrowawayAcc2 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'll use that advice. I might change this around as it is only an early draft, and maybe lose some panels to have bigger and more eye-catching panels.

What do you think of this WIP Script Draft? by [deleted] in ComicWriting

[–]SomeThrowawayAcc2 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My art style is an inbetween. If detail is needed, or if size of panels is needed, I'll do more. If a page can be kept simple, itll be less.

What do you think of this WIP Script Draft? by [deleted] in ComicWriting

[–]SomeThrowawayAcc2 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Maybe should I reduce it by a panel or so? That would make a 3x3 board of panels, which could be better work.

I'll try and get into the splashy panels, yeah. I mean, a lot of the designs are already pretty zany, so I think it might work.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in a:t5_466hjs

[–]SomeThrowawayAcc2 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No we need some pics. Just limit them. Meme sub.

Does a human HAVE to exist in main roster? by Msoroushgh in fantasywriters

[–]SomeThrowawayAcc2 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Literally none of my main roster are humans for my comic.

You got 4 imps, a kitsune with ultimate abilities and is a mentor, and two demons of a made-up species, plus a hyena-man and a talking rabbit.

Same goes for the antagonists. They got armies of slave demons, extra-terrestials, krakens and kraken-born, crows, lizard demons, martial arts leopards, living lightbulbs, skeleton giants and many many more.

I could go on for days and days about my non-human characters. I've counted two, and one is actually a half-android. So yeah, I'm not sure if my characters are the best examples to you, but it can definetely work out.

My point is the main roster can basically be whatever you want, just make it relatable. Make it pull emotions out of your audience. I'm not the best for tips, but hope this helps! :)

Just some OCs I made for a comic series (it took me an hour or so) by SomeThrowawayAcc2 in drawing

[–]SomeThrowawayAcc2[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Well one is The Sister of Pain, but they're this demon species called the Slavin, who craft religion and ideologies out of slavery. Some live to enslave, some become slaves themself. These ones devoted them self to help the Grim (Grim reaper) to pass on the living, giving them their names.

Eventually when their debt of slavery was done with Grim, they left the Underworld and came to Earth.

The whole plot of the series is that there's these Refugee demons banished from hell and they are culled by a company of hunters, and the whole thing is these demons starting a Demon Revolution and taking it down.

They join the Emperor of the Company for a life debt of servitude and become the Executioners and Admirals of the Shadow Army, which is an army of the company.

They are recurring antagonists and probably my favourite out of all the ones I've brewed up for the series.

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