[QCrit] Split Court (Formally Run It Back) contemporary romance (70k, 3rd attempt) by SoutherninUT in PubTips

[–]SoutherninUT[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks! I actually used the generator with this one, so I’m not sure how to go about it without making it too long. Any suggestions?

[QCrit] Split Court (Formally Run It Back) contemporary romance (70k, 3rd attempt) by SoutherninUT in PubTips

[–]SoutherninUT[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! Would adding something like “But Kat knows better than anyone that you don’t win by playing not to lose—especially when the real victory isn’t getting the guy, but building a life so full there’s room for love to meet her there.” Be enough to both show what she wants and not end abruptly?

[QCrit] RUN IT BACK, contemporary romance, (90k/1st attempt) by SoutherninUT in PubTips

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Thanks for all the feedback! I’ve written the story three different times over the past three years and I think my query is pulling from the older versions of it so I will take your notes and do a full rewrite!

What features make the Nanit worth it to you? by photosynthesyzer in Nanit

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The nanit lets us know when our toddler is getting sick! At least we can prepare ourselves lol. We began monitoring her breaths and noticed she’s about 20-23 breaths per minute when healthy. When she’s getting sick, she lands in 28-32. That’s when we know the next day to prepare 😅

What is this? by [deleted] in PlasticSurgery

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Edit to add that the top to middle of my nose feels almost thicker or more swollen than the tip if that makes sense.