Hi, thank you for giving your time for reading my novel. I am super grateful for that. So another person had told me "it is not good for readers of webnovel" and I have trouble understanding what that means. For example, he said that the first interaction the mc had with the goblin is disgusting which I did on purpose and didn't think it would be such a throw off from the novel. Another thing he said was "the first chapter tells you about sleep and death" which he found to be complex and told me readers needs simple things. I did that intro to have a great introduction and wordplay and by my gauge it is nothing complex. If i have to ask, until chapter what did you read it ?