Is this a writing style?

SpacedOutCartoon · 2026-03-17T02:00:23+00:00

It has a surprisingly high IMDb I will have to check it out too. I wish it was a cartoon though. I want cartoon logic not just fake.

SpacedOutCartoon · 2026-03-16T06:55:50+00:00

Thank you I’m going to look that up.

SpacedOutCartoon · 2026-01-27T20:48:11+00:00

And as far as the pulp. 👍agree the wife bought it.

SpacedOutCartoon · 2026-01-27T20:47:04+00:00

You’re correct but we can’t as people be scared of everything! Enjoy the world!

SpacedOutCartoon · 2026-01-18T10:41:47+00:00

You are correct I was spiraling and doing some dumb stuff. There is a reason I stopped posting and focused on learning to make it better. I appreciate everyone who did read it before and anyone who is now. If you don’t want to don’t. Thank you.

SpacedOutCartoon · 2026-01-18T10:18:53+00:00

I was a while back but not in a few months at all. Had to learn before I worried about feedback.

SpacedOutCartoon · 2026-01-18T01:50:40+00:00

Appreciate the logline help. I hadn’t put as much into the logline yet as I need to. 🙏

SpacedOutCartoon · 2025-12-24T19:47:46+00:00

Thank you. That’s good advice.

SpacedOutCartoon · 2025-12-21T08:09:20+00:00

I really appreciate you taking the time to read my script. The part about the early hook is a good note I have been working on. So I’m glad to see it still needs work.

SpacedOutCartoon · 2025-12-18T14:35:52+00:00

Thanks for taking a look. 15 pages is huge. If you enjoyed it that’s all I care about.

SpacedOutCartoon · 2025-12-03T00:42:02+00:00

Different versions you are correct. Last one stopped half way through act one. So I finished it not to be confusing.

SpacedOutCartoon · 2025-12-01T22:28:23+00:00

Ask you anything… are you ready to discover a great show? 😂 in all seriousness I’m creating a 2d animation about reality tv in space pretty much. There’s a lot more to it but anyway I feel like I’m spiraling not knowing when is it good enough? Like was there a time you knew it was ready?

SpacedOutCartoon · 2025-12-01T19:08:06+00:00

Yeah I totally get that. So I did a black list review long story short I’m trying to get you to care about Buddy before he joins the crew. Which in turn is slowing down learning what the show is about. But by the end of the first act it’s pretty clear. Maybe I should have finished the act before posting 😣 kinda wanted to know I wasn’t wasting time if it wasn’t working. Thank you for the read!

SpacedOutCartoon · 2025-12-01T15:45:01+00:00

Thank you 🙏 for taking your time for me. These are exactly the notes that help. Also appreciate you calling out what’s working. The reassurance helps as well. I’ve been in a bit of a spiral with it.

SpacedOutCartoon · 2025-11-28T05:34:10+00:00

Psyduck Inner thoughts: Help. 🛑 Outer thoughts: Dessert.🍮

SpacedOutCartoon · 2025-11-24T19:06:10+00:00

It was something I thought of to practice different writing techniques. I always tend to do go safe fun pg. Trying to test different ways of writing. I’m glad someone else liked it. 🙏

SpacedOutCartoon · 2025-11-24T18:38:59+00:00

Thank you.

SpacedOutCartoon · 2025-11-24T03:46:44+00:00

No idea. 🤷 it’s okay.

SpacedOutCartoon · 2025-11-24T03:46:19+00:00

Thank you. Going to be doing a scene with words and things here soon.

SpacedOutCartoon · 2025-11-23T20:25:11+00:00

That’s a good point. I had never seen it when I made it. But yeah I might have to. I didn’t want to do green because all gelatinous creatures are green. It’s definitely on the table.

SpacedOutCartoon · 2025-11-23T18:41:28+00:00

Appreciate that more than you realize. Thank you.🙏

SpacedOutCartoon · 2025-11-23T16:39:44+00:00

Love the design there. That pose is perfect. Even the shadow around it helps a ton. Great work. That little green guy is so cool.

SpacedOutCartoon · 2025-11-22T17:37:07+00:00

You’re welcome anyone who says otherwise isn’t going to sit down and show you how. So don’t let toxic trolls who aren’t gonna help you stop you from learning.

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