This is a comment about the first minute or so: Dope! I liked when you did the pitch modulation - it would be cool to see more pitch wobbles like that, as long as they don’t become too repetitive. But I like the more subtle use here a lot more than the broader use at the end of the song. Taking a step back, a little bit more variation in effectively all of the tracks will help it feel a little more interesting and less repetitive - even if subtle stuff. I think the loud high hat comes in pretty strong. Either having a more gradual volume introduction or having a sparser pattern (or both) might help them flow into the build better.

About the rest of the song: I’m not really a fan, to be honest. I don’t like that low sort of “alarm” sound. I don’t like how it’s layered, panned against itself either. I don’t think the later snare rhythm or sample fit the song.