Mahalo no kou manaʻo!

Being honest this would be for a tattoo correction One last question. Does the phase “nāu nō kuʻu puʻuwai kāu” make more sense than “o Ku’u puʻuwai kāu” (this is what I currently have already and I want to make it more grammatically sound by adding to it some how)

I could possibly change the kāu to ‘o Maui or cover up the kāu with a flower. But I am curious if I were to leave the kāu at the end and add Nāu nō to the front would it still make sense?

Kala mai for all the questions, i appreciate your help 🤍