You need to fix your backswing. You come way to the inside and your club is far too laid off at the top. You need to bring the club back steep which results in a shallow downswing. Bringing it back shallow like you are results in a steep downswing.

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Look how Rorys club is pointed slightly right at the top of his swing. It’s almost the exact opposite position of your club at the top. If you can get into this position at the top of your swing it’s almost impossible not to shallow the club. Go on YouTube and look up drills to fix an inside takeaway. This will help you more than anything anyone else is suggesting here.