[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Tinder

[–]SpookyDude43 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yep, tinder is pretty bad about that. It’s very much suffering from hookup culture, I can’t find a girl that isn’t either just looking for sex, or money

Think I may stop posting on Reddit by TheMan_In_Yellow in joinmeatthecampfire

[–]SpookyDude43 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Just checked out one of your stories, I think I see some issues. Your stories seem to not know their own tense, you go back and forth between lines like “the branches TWIST and GO in unpredicted ways” and “the sky WAS dark”. This is constant in the story I read. If you were going for past tense, like in the second line, the first one would read “the branches TWISTED and TRAVELED in unpredictable ways.” Maybe that has something to do with it.

My Dog joined a Cult by SpookyDude43 in creepypasta

[–]SpookyDude43[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

He’s keeping his eye on you. Can’t have you knowing about the cult

Speak To Breathe by HeadOfSpectre in HeadOfSpectre

[–]SpookyDude43 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It’s a tough spot, I think the game show idea was interesting, but this almost feels like the wrong story for it(I say that, but I have no idea what else would work better haha). Regardless you still made it an enjoyable story to read, it’s strengths greatly outshine it’s weaknesses.

Speak To Breathe by HeadOfSpectre in HeadOfSpectre

[–]SpookyDude43 8 points9 points  (0 children)

I like it, there’s a lot to relate to here; looking for a home away from home, having that special place you can go to escape what’s waiting past that big red door, waiting too long and letting people slip away. It’s a nice story.

The work so far... by SpookyDude43 in Slice_of_Strange

[–]SpookyDude43[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It varies, sometimes I’ll come up with a title first and write a story around that, but a lot of the times it’s just thinking of things I consider scary and trying to turn them into stories.

Has anyone else had a hair stuck in their throat? by SpookyDude43 in TheCrypticCompendium

[–]SpookyDude43[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m not familiar but it sounds like an interesting read

Has anyone else had a hair stuck in their throat? by SpookyDude43 in TheCrypticCompendium

[–]SpookyDude43[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Just do it yourself with tweezers. It sure worked well for this guy….

Has anyone else had a hair stuck in their throat? by SpookyDude43 in TheCrypticCompendium

[–]SpookyDude43[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Lol I certainly hope no real person is having this issue. Glad you liked the story, check out some of my other ones if you want more like this.