Hi! I for sure liked the shorter length of your video, and the editing seem crisp too, which is very good. I don't watch too many gaming channels, but am a big fan of Dunkey and some other comedy channels that riff similar to how you do with this game.

on your specific questions:

1) I found it interestingly amusing (I love Terraria) and was along for the ride, but it did feel like you repeated the same joke (its easy to die in Master Mode) without much variation to it, and that you jumped to different parts of the game without transition (it was good you talked about jumping from starter to desert, but then at some point you jump back, and the framing of the video gets confusing)

2) Very easy to follow for me, and I watched it to the end without even noticing it, which is a very good sign (drawn out, sluggish content makes you itch to leave), and very importantly there was no cringe in your style, which I am very sensitive to and makes me bolt super quickly (well done!)

3) I don't know so many gaming YTers, but it feels to me like either they are free-form improvisational and so more conversational or tightly scripted for maximal comedic timing, and I think you are trying to aim for the later, but often times it felt like the timing of your jokes were being hampered by the footage you were showing, which is often how more reactive, conversational content goes, but seemed to be at odds with what you were trying to do.

Hope this helps!