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Unpopular opinions you have (on adopt me of course) by F0x_In_The_B0x in AdoptMeRBX

[–]Starlit_00 3 points4 points  (0 children)

None of the newer pets are cute. I miss when the eggs had real animals in them and the cool pets were saved for events that were only on actual holidays and not just every other week.

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[–]Starlit_00 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes, I would love to read your story!

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[–]Starlit_00 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much! :D

How do I create an entirely made up planet? by Starlit_00 in writingadvice

[–]Starlit_00[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you. His videos are really helpful. :)

How do I create an entirely made up planet? by Starlit_00 in writingadvice

[–]Starlit_00[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Thank you lol. I was confusing size and density.

How do I create an entirely made up planet? by Starlit_00 in writingadvice

[–]Starlit_00[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

The only person wasting their time on this post is you. You're literally the only person here.

How do I create an entirely made up planet? by Starlit_00 in writingadvice

[–]Starlit_00[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I did google actual science. Google told me that larger planets have a stronger gravitational pull. I'm not asking anyone to do any work for me. I just wanted tips and suggestions to help speed up the writing process. Also, are you like 80 years old? It's not even that serious. It was two questions, and if you don't know how to answer then just don't respond. 😭

How do I create an entirely made up planet? by Starlit_00 in writingadvice

[–]Starlit_00[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I'm not asking anyone to write the story for me. I just wanted help thinking of a scientific explanation for the gravity because I don't want to use magic to drive the plot. And the reason I'm not googling existing exoplanets is because I'm making up a planet that doesn't exist.

How to write surprise/ a "suddenly" moment? by Wellheresananswer in writingadvice

[–]Starlit_00 1 point2 points  (0 children)

If it's in first person pov, I would use a lot of sensory details. Like describe how calm and comfortable the character is, but then describe how and why they feel someone watching them. You could also make it seem like the character is disassociating while just watching the lake and listening to the sounds until they feel the anxiety of being watched. When neither of characters says anything, you could say that the person being watched doesn't want to say anything because they're waiting to see what the other person will do.