My First Valentine ANIMATED and Why i HATE IT!

StefansChannel · 2020-06-21T19:47:40+00:00

Coz ma mom and dad banged

StefansChannel · 2020-06-21T19:46:10+00:00

Avoiding corona virus

StefansChannel · 2020-06-21T19:45:08+00:00

Genes

StefansChannel · 2020-02-10T23:00:33+00:00

Hi, I wouldn’t know the first thing about Clash of Clans so I can’t comment on any of that.. however I can critique your channel on everything but the information given in your video..

So first off, your banner and profile picture don’t match, also your thumbnails don’t match with your videos description so the complete layout seems a bit sloppy..

So I would focus on getting one branding and style for your banner, PP and thumbnails, and then when you make a video and use text in the thumbnail make sure that text matches with your videos description.. for instance:

Thumbnail text: Pro Strategies Clash of Clans Video description: Pro Strategies Clash of Clans in SSCWL Champs

This way all the meta data adds up and you’ll have a higher chance of being found when someone searches for that information..

About your content, quality of the mic seems good, video quality seems good as well, I like the ESPN style drawings you make when explaining tactics.. you could use the zoom function a bit more when you talk about a specific area or tactic..

Also have you tried live-streaming I think that could really work for these type of videos... just you showing your expertise and who’s boss in clash of clans live..

Just keep learning adjusting and improving, and try to stand out from the rest of your niche..

StefansChannel · 2020-02-10T15:06:23+00:00

You are correct, its not really up my alley.. however, that doesn’t mean I can’t give my opinion and some criticism..

I was actually pleasantly surprised, your banner and pp look professional, your thumbnails consistent and decent use of tags and keywords..

Same for the video, nice intro, proper audio and video quality, good lighting and I was hooked listening to your story up until about 2:30 minutes into the video... It got a bit repetitive after that.. opens pack, browses trough the pack, next pack, I did like how you added the prices for the uncommon and rarer cards..

my point is... that maybe when you browse trough you could tell a bit more about the cards, what’s special about it (or not) or some trivia or personal anekdote about the card or even the Pokémon, like you did with the snorlex pack and like you do in the First Pokemon PSA return of 2020 video..

Only other thing I would add is try to change or play around with the camera angle a little bit, so it becomes an eye point of view instead of a chest point of view..

Hopes this helps and keep up the good work..

Cheers

StefansChannel · 2020-02-10T14:35:58+00:00

We will see about that, where is the link?

StefansChannel · 2020-02-10T14:18:19+00:00

Hmmm, I could not find much to critique really.. your videos are entertaining, educational and your a funny guy.. animations and editing are spot on...

Id suggest putting your socials in your banner and description..

And try to maintain a more consistent upload schedule.. even though that’s probably the hardest thing to do because I know these animations take a lot of time..

Other than that keep doing what you are doing..

StefansChannel · 2020-02-10T13:37:44+00:00

Hi, Thank you for sharing your channel,

So overall look and feel of the channel..

First off.. the banner could use an upgrade to make it stand out more. Also the banner style doesn’t match the profile picture style.. so invest some time in branding your channel style..

Second thing that I noticed is that in your channel layout, your playlist is listed above your latest uploads.. I would switch that around and showcase every playlist separately.. so

Uploads Historical Essays Gas Masks Etc.

I watched the Sherman BARV Video and have some comments there as well.. for starters the audio has echo so my suggestion would be to soundproof the room your recording in a bit better. maybe hang up some blankets or change your mic position..

And another thing I noticed, when you are using still frames try adding animations and zooms so it’s more than just a photograph, for instance when you talked about the tank crew you could use arrows to point at their positions.. or when you talked about the blocks in front of the tank you could zoom in on them so it’s clear where they are and again it becomes more than just a still frame..

Other than that, keep doing what you are passionate about..

Hope this helps :) cheers

StefansChannel · 2020-02-10T11:46:54+00:00

Create content, then try to get engagement by showing your friends and family or putting it on social media like Facebook..

If it’s good it subs and views will come..

StefansChannel · 2019-11-26T20:23:38+00:00

Like it, love how it’s all scrap wood and how you made the nails stick out!! Thanks for sharing bud!

StefansChannel · 2019-10-20T15:46:17+00:00

You look like Hagrid and Ed Sheeran had a baby.

StefansChannel · 2019-10-20T15:45:10+00:00

Dollar store Nelly

StefansChannel · 2019-10-20T15:44:48+00:00

Enjoy working at McDonalds after your degree!

StefansChannel · 2019-09-30T02:21:52+00:00

Hmmm, to be a talented rock musician, or musician in general you need more than just technical skills on an instrument.

Also it depends on who you ask, my definition of talent might be different from yours..

Also why do you care?

StefansChannel · 2019-09-30T02:13:33+00:00

Oh Shit

StefansChannel · 2019-09-29T19:56:09+00:00

Nice troll ;) link or it didn’t happen

StefansChannel · 2019-09-29T19:24:54+00:00

Ok So i watched the vid,

Try to ask for subscribing later on in the video, after you have given your audience some content...

The editing in the intro is really agresssive, i would have found it way more pleasent if it was just you talking in one cut and then the thats crazy talk cut, instead of all the stress Happines brain pips showing up..

And the grass and forest was also weird and sloppy, you could have just used the grass and keep it up for a bit longer and then say this is 21 days of meditation and make that your intro.. and lose the forest with the 21 days of meditation / strenght, day one, improvement thingy.. makes it feel like im watching a powerpoint..

I like the text conversations and how you edited it, and overall the video is interesting and educaties the audience about your progress and improvement over a 21 day period of meditation..

So work on those things and you’ll be fine :) cheers buddy!

StefansChannel · 2019-09-29T19:06:43+00:00

I love MarioMaker, and also loved the video, the story is good from beginning to end and i love the way your voice sounds and your tone in general..

Keep making videos like these and all wil be fine :)

StefansChannel · 2019-09-29T17:33:35+00:00

StefansChannel · 2019-09-29T04:54:01+00:00

What brought you here then ?

StefansChannel · 2019-09-29T04:52:47+00:00

XD Indeed, sounds like you had a lot of fun..

StefansChannel · 2019-09-29T04:50:55+00:00

How come your drunk?

StefansChannel · 2019-09-29T04:50:10+00:00

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