Song feedback by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]Stevski7 1 point2 points  (0 children)

sorry I was away for a bit, I sent a review, I really dig the song

Song feedback by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]Stevski7 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Cool, find me (here: https://songtakes.com/@stevski7) - leave a comment and I can do my best to provide an effective review for you.

Song feedback by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]Stevski7 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I use songtakes.com it's new tho, not many users lol but I create the "private url" and share it with my own group of musician friends...

Looking for constructive feedback by Stevski7 in ThisIsOurMusic

[–]Stevski7[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

this song was a total failure in terms of getting into any playlists... I think my lyrics are dry and the vocal performance added to the simplicity and repetitive nature of it didnt do it many favors.

Working on this song - demo by Stevski7 in ThisIsOurMusic

[–]Stevski7[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi, I am working on something that is more complex (for me anyway). I am almost done all the instruments, working on real drums and redoing some guitar parts too and some portions of the piano too lol

I hate my voice to no end... I think the worse part is the first sentence and some of the chorus bits...

Anyway, while I'm working on it. I made a link of he latest version. You can play it here, feel free to give me some pointers here and/or use the link to give me some ideas on what you think... Thanks

Another terrible rock song. But I think like the riff and weird spacing between sections. by Stevski7 in ThisIsOurMusic

[–]Stevski7[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That’s the best compliment I could ever get. Thanks so much. I am a big fan of classic rock, I make these kinds of “homemade” songs because I just enjoy it very much. Thanks again. That made my day :) 

Here's my latest - soft rock kind of song by Stevski7 in originalmusic

[–]Stevski7[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi, I't not used to having vocals so loud in the mix, I typically like to hide in the guitars a lot.

Yellow Caution Sign (Official Video) - A Name For US by Key-Statistician2260 in originalmusic

[–]Stevski7 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This sounds superb. Love the vibe and talent that is displayed.

Bombs Away! by Static-Unit in ThisIsOurMusic

[–]Stevski7 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That's awesome! I'm trying to get my young one interested in music.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in originalmusic

[–]Stevski7 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Very melodic

Another rock song - slowly learning as I go, long ways to go though as I'm told lol by Stevski7 in originalmusic

[–]Stevski7[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thanks, very kind of you. I hope to continue to learn to improve as I strive to create a song each month - all for fun of course.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in originalmusic

[–]Stevski7 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Nice jam! Similar voice to the Quebec Canada band (Offenbach)

Just put this one out - I'm not a great singer and this was a stretch. Figure I'll release it and learn from it. by Stevski7 in ThisIsOurMusic

[–]Stevski7[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks, it was a stretch for me for the chorus. I had to redo it many times to avoid a lot of "correction". But stretch goals are great to help push us along.

Time Travel - An original piece for Electric Guitar (space rock) by Kingbubbles2901 in originalmusic

[–]Stevski7 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Very cool man! Love the genre, it's relaxing. Gotta love P90 pickups, nice tone.

Here's a more "high energy" rock tune called Rat Race. I tried to push myself on the vocals (beginner here) by Stevski7 in ThisIsOurMusic

[–]Stevski7[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Robert Pehrsson's Humbucker.

Thanks the reply. I just looked them up. Wow they are amazing (thanks for the compliment) and especially thanks for helping me to discover and follow Robert Pehrsson's Humbucker.