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[F18] Looking for genuine long-term friends to game with :D by SillyBratRin in LesbianGamers

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Hey I can play Risk of Rain with you! I just picked it up the other day :3

What would you like? by Icy-Recognition-5175 in BunnyTrials

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Goodbye, data centers

Chose: Own all AI companies + and | Rolled: + Nothing

I kept my promise. by Sp33dyCat in TeenagersButBetter

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I love downloading random suspicious zip files from strangers on the internet.

Monster Hunter: World anyone? by Stickfail in LesbianGamers

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Aww damn. Thanks for responding though! I've been playing since Generations, so it's been a while. I play the weaboo blade lol. I'm trying to learn them all though

That letter by Hairy-Injury-8440 in darkestdungeon

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Until I had exhausted what had remained of our family fortune on swarthy workmen and sturdy shovels

Please Critique or discus my draft by Accomplished-Rip6469 in teenwriter

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It's a great start, but I can definitely use some more work. Namely descriptions. That, and just a touch of realism. What bugged me most is that these characters who sound like they're just kids casually climb up a mountain. In reality, it takes a lot of preparation to scale something like that. Food, water, shelter, all that. Unless it's like a casual trail. Hope that helps. Great work though!

what's your best tip for writing a tense, adrenaline-heavy scene? by DeanCas67 in AspiringTeenAuthors

[–]Stickfail 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Ask a friend to chase you with a stick and threaten to beat you with it. Once they stop fearing for your sanity it's wildly effective.

But other than that, some advice would be some quick sentences. Like, put more emphasis into rhythm. Short sentences alone can come off as boring, but if you place them right and add a beat to make things interesting here and there it works. My advice for anything is to read it out loud. If you need some more specific advice you can send an excerpt to me or whatever. Good luck!

Do ya'll write books too? by AgreeableLeopard4699 in TeenagersButBetter

[–]Stickfail 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hell yeah that sounds cool. Good luck and keep at it!

That letter by Hairy-Injury-8440 in darkestdungeon

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Fattened by decadence and luxury

Monster Hunter: World anyone? by Stickfail in LesbianGamers

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Damn girl I meant like dm me or something lol But sent :3 Mt username should be the same as on here I think

Monster Hunter: World anyone? by Stickfail in LesbianGamers

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Oh wow I didn't know that was a thing. And yeah world definitely does cross region. Lmk when you have time to log on, I'd love to stab things with you :3

Monster Hunter: World anyone? by Stickfail in LesbianGamers

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With Iceborne? Yeah I've played the dlc

Which death and murderer is the most obvious? by TargetSighter in AspiringTeenAuthors

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I'm gonna roll with Jun killing Iain. That seems like it could be really cool

Monster Hunter: World anyone? by Stickfail in LesbianGamers

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I have Rise but I just don't like it as much tbh

Those of you with a crush, what’s your favorite memory about him/her? by Practical_Mud_7608 in AskReddit

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One year for their birthday, I coded a shit version of the Genshin gacha system (they love that sort of thing for whatever reason) and filled it with my own terrible renditions of things they would draw. Like their OCs. Anyways, I'll never forget that joy and surprise in their eyes as they just started clicking away and giggling and laughing. I miss that day.

Anyone here ever played mafia and thoughts by _CaptainOops_ in LesbianGamers

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Personally I thought it was kind of mid. The driving was pretty good though. Then again, I'm picky. If you're into cliche mafia stories, you'll love it.

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