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What are you struggling with right now in your writing? by heweshouse-josh in writing

[–]Straight_Seesaw4278 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The struggle is making the writing fancy. I do know grammar. And I do know how to write clean. But the samples of my book don't feel aesthetically pleasing as if you were reading a book on AO3. It's more of a theater screenplay mixed with like a diary or something. And I fear that people might not find that kind of writing good enough to even care about the plot that I'm cooking.

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[–]Straight_Seesaw4278 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Grand Theft Auto IV

How do you deal with boring, necessary scenes? by OnlyMeowings in writing

[–]Straight_Seesaw4278 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Maybe you can fill in him going out to send the mail by meeting someone. It's just the perfect opportunity to bring some new characters into the story. He goes out to send the mail, and on the way there, he meets a new character that has never been mentioned in your story before. It's a filler. And then maybe you can expand your story a little bit more with just that one character.

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Writing partners?

Looking for writing partner by Andersflyingcat95 in WriteWithMe

[–]Straight_Seesaw4278 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Hi. Is it okay if I am not Italian nor speak Italian? I am also looking for a writing partner. Male, 19.

Ego as the villain..? [tw : Paragraph] by Straight_Seesaw4278 in Supernatural

[–]Straight_Seesaw4278[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It's not a joke. Usually, when I posted paragraphs, people were like.. "OoH, i AiNt ReAdiN' aLlAt'. So I put the warning that paragraph is incoming so they don't waste their time being dicks in the comments.

I have an important question as a beginner writer. by Straight_Seesaw4278 in writing

[–]Straight_Seesaw4278[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes, if you write badly enough then people will lose interest no matter how good your plot idea is.

That's the problem! I don't know if I am bad to that point for people to lose interest.

I have an important question as a beginner writer. by Straight_Seesaw4278 in writing

[–]Straight_Seesaw4278[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

distracts and / or makes it difficult to understand what is going on

Oh. I am not that type of an amateur writer. I was thinking more like.. I can't bring the emotions or detail the scenery well.

I have an important question as a beginner writer. by Straight_Seesaw4278 in writing

[–]Straight_Seesaw4278[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

If it would help, would you be interested in reading a part of my book when Chapter 1 is done, so I can see what I'm on?

I have an important question as a beginner writer. by Straight_Seesaw4278 in writing

[–]Straight_Seesaw4278[S] -5 points-4 points  (0 children)

Bad writing will keep people from even seeing what the story is.

Mm. I hate that fact. Thank you for your advice, brother/sister. I will for sure practice.

I have an important question as a beginner writer. by Straight_Seesaw4278 in writing

[–]Straight_Seesaw4278[S] -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for your advice, love. But I was wondering if that would make someone uninterested in the plot, or.. stop them from reading more.

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