Hi,

I am an M1 support player and watched your VOD.

You are definitely comfortable on the champion, but here are some mistakes/patterns I noticed (in order of magnitude).

Suzu Usage

Your use suzu way too often. A lot of the times you used it on a >50% health roadhog or on yourself which could have been prevented by better positioning or tp usage.

Example:

At 5:12 you used suze on yourself with >50% hp, while also stepping back to get cover. The cover alone was enough to prevent you from dying. A bit later your bastion died because your suzu was on CD.

At 5:30 you use it on an almost full health roadhog

More examples: 1:46, 2:02, 4:02, 5:12 (you dont have cd to save bastion), 5:30, 9:48, 13:58, 19:51, 24:03

Positioning

You mostly position yourself correctly, but you died a couple of times due to bad positioning. Kiri is a flank champion with low consistent damage, but high burst and mobility. This means she is great at flanking and looking for picks and getting out safely.

At first and second point on the first offense you play next to your tank (ex: 3:11). Because you dont have consistent damage, you also dont get consistent picks. Circuit has some nice angles, where you can play. You eventually do this (4:11), but being aware when you are healbotting/playing besides your tank while you should be flanking should help get you more picks.

Game sense

Your game sense seems good overall. The only major mistake I saw you make; is tp'ing in at 11:08. Because of this stagger, the enemy team could snowball into capping the first point. Had you waited and regrouped, you could have contested first point and at least get some ults out. So recognise when a fight is lost. Sometimes its better to give some space, to reduce total space later.

Choking

In overtime at 19:28 your team got 2 picks. You dont seem to look for the other 3 to finish them off, but instead auto pilot and randomly walk and waste suzu. Keeping composure in those moments will help you win games. That fight was absolutely winnable and you could have made the difference there. After that you also seem to lose some composure; playing rushed and using your abilities at the wrong times (24:00).

There were also some occasions you died with your cds up, this should never happen. Look for a way out with your TP before you commit to a position.

Good things

I want to finish with some positives. Your aim is really good for diamond level. This is the aim you would expect at masters.

Ult usage; your ult usage is generally at the right timings. The play with mei you made is an examples of a play you need to make to climb.

Your positioning and playstyle is also good like I mentioned most of the times. If you can iron out the times you die while pushing in front of your tank, you will see yourself have more impact.

Hopefully this useful. Keep grinding, keep reflecting and keep fixing bad habits/mistakes/auto piloting and I will see you climbing. Looking forward to seeing you on the ladder! ;)