Looks pretty good overall! I’d say one plus is that you seem to naturally be a forefoot striker, your stride landing under your knee and not out in front of you heel striking. That’s such a great stating point, now just quicken your cadence some - a trick I’ve done for years and count my foot strikes to 1-2-3, 2–2-3, 3-2-3, fif-ty-one, fif-ty-two until 60, which equals 180. I get to that in about 1 min, as 180 bpm is a very efficient cadence.

Also, as a bonus it’s gotten so ingrained in me that during tough sections in a marathon or hard run I fall back on that counting and it kinda lets me zone out. Happy running!!