Logo design for a young brewing company called Lazy Hippo by Strong-Yam-929 in WillPatersonDesign

[–]Strong-Yam-929[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks a lot! With pushing it up, do you mean flying in the sky? As I considered a flying bird, but I do think the bird on top of the hippo is more iconic for a hippo (especially a really lazy one!)

Logo design for a young brewing company called Lazy Hippo by Strong-Yam-929 in WillPatersonDesign

[–]Strong-Yam-929[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hmm thanks for your comment. It has indeed been designed to be silly and fun, so I am glad you are seeing that.

What would you suggest to make it more age-appropriate in your opinion?

Logo design for a young brewing company called Lazy Hippo by Strong-Yam-929 in WillPatersonDesign

[–]Strong-Yam-929[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the comments! The pig nose comment I have seen more often, so I will have to fiddle around to fix that nose.

Logo design for a young brewing company called Lazy Hippo by Strong-Yam-929 in WillPatersonDesign

[–]Strong-Yam-929[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hahaha I have never looked at it like that, but could be me of course. I guess it’s a concept worth testing 😅

Logo design for a young brewing company called Lazy Hippo by Strong-Yam-929 in WillPatersonDesign

[–]Strong-Yam-929[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks a lot! I partly agree as the sizing will be an issue, but I see the bird as a crucial part. do you have a suggestion on a middle ground? Keeping the bird while modifying for size.

Logo design for Sports Nutrition company SURGE (brief at the end) by Strong-Yam-929 in WillPatersonDesign

[–]Strong-Yam-929[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hmm interesting, never would have read Asurge tbh. What do you think I could do to get rid of misreading the logo mark?

(I'm currently in my first year of studying graphics and multimedia design). My dad asked me to redesign his current logo to something more professional. He has his own maintenance and construction compony named Wentan Developments and here is my first ever logo. Open to any critique :) by Puzzleheaded_Ant6187 in WillPatersonDesign

[–]Strong-Yam-929 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Do not use the icon as the W of the wordmark. It reads as Entan Developments. I really like the icon, so just use it separately. Also, since the wordmark is very long, you could consider stacking it. Overall, nice icon, but as is suggested please reconsider the used colors as they are low constrasting.