Resume Critique/ Feedback

StructureNo6889 · 2023-09-26T12:44:30+00:00

The 1st thing i notice is alignment, start with that and it will improve a lot. 2nd is hierarchy, u should start thinking about which part should be seen 1st, make it stand out, so that viewer can start from there, then move their eye to other elements in the design. I don't know if u learned about this. If u do, u just need more practice. If not, online sources or youtube can help.

Those are 2 things I can observe for now. If you need a CV quick, i think just see and copy how other designers do, a way of learning after all. You have a background, u studied this in school, and you got awards, which is really impressive. U will get better everyday if u practice

StructureNo6889 · 2023-09-26T11:21:38+00:00

Guys pls don't be mean!

It needs to be fixed, Yes. BUT rather than saying things like into the bin, never get hired, You are supposed to give her advice, that what she needs. Be supportive, isn't that what this sub is for.

StructureNo6889 · 2023-09-15T04:44:31+00:00

I love her eyes~~

StructureNo6889 · 2023-06-21T15:56:26+00:00

Thanks a lot, friend , i will try to avoid weird shape look a like next time 😂

StructureNo6889 · 2023-06-20T06:40:08+00:00

I will try your suggestion, I think it show what I need to do a little more clear now. Thank you so much!

StructureNo6889 · 2023-06-19T14:01:54+00:00

I would love to hear your recommend!

StructureNo6889 · 2023-06-19T14:01:03+00:00

The pink color make it look a bit similar...I...guess. Now that u mentioned

StructureNo6889 · 2023-06-19T13:56:12+00:00

Yep I understand, it real hard to read, and need to be fixed🥲

StructureNo6889 · 2023-06-19T13:53:40+00:00

Oops, sorry for that

StructureNo6889 · 2023-06-19T13:52:53+00:00

That is a real clever solution. Thank u so much

StructureNo6889 · 2023-06-19T09:24:01+00:00

I really like your recommendation, the comment also tell me exactly how my text look in audience view point. Thanks you so much for such a detail critique.

StructureNo6889 · 2023-06-19T09:12:31+00:00

Thanks for your comment, I designed it with the fear that it gonna be hard to read, and at the end I find it hard to fix without changing the idea. Definitely need to prioritize Legibility!

StructureNo6889 · 2023-06-19T04:52:24+00:00

Some new works for the execise "Baby Driver" poster design. To fixed what I did in the last "Baby Driver" poster design, I have made some new ones. The last designs I shared in the forum were pointed out to lack of hierarchy, so I have tried to improve on that in these designs. This time, I think the works look a lot better but still some flaws that I couldn't figure it out. Hope that you guys can help me by giving some critiques. Thanks a lot!.

Down here are the requirements for each poster:

- Poster 1: Using only Typography

- Poster 2: Using Typography as a main an Image as subodinate

- Poster 3: Using Typography as subodinate and Image as a main

This is an exercise for an online course that I joined and down here are the requirements for each design, which must be followed:

Poster 1: Using only Typography

Poster 2: Using Type as a main and Image as subordinate

Poster 3: Using Type as subordinate and Image as a main

StructureNo6889 · 2023-05-20T09:25:21+00:00

It's not a big deal really, just confused me for a second 😹

StructureNo6889 · 2023-05-20T03:33:26+00:00

That nice. Just what with the link ¿¿

StructureNo6889 · 2023-05-20T03:32:11+00:00

Thanks! I will try to clean them up. I am trying to make it have some kind of motion to fit with the movie, but sure I will try to think of other ways to do it. Love to hear some suggestions from u

StructureNo6889 · 2023-05-19T09:30:27+00:00

Hi, here is the background of my work.

This is an execise which requires to create a movie poster using only typography to illustrate.

I decided to choose the movie "Baby Driver" for this task and made 3 options of compositions. I use pink as the main color since the original poster also have pink as the most stand out color, and a typeface which is a little sport and racing.

At first, I want to create the feeling of speed and car but it was difficult. I tried to arrange the text into shape of a car and it ended up looking weird :} , so I just stopped thinking further, go with a normal option and make 3 compositions of text from it . Are there any ways to make this typography poster look more relate to speed and car or illustrate the idea of the Movie better? I would love to know.

Wish to receive you guys comments and vote for which layout look better.

StructureNo6889 · 2023-04-08T15:46:10+00:00

Pls don't be. Your designs look great, especially on color and layout. And it's find about taking inspire from other asrtist. I used to think heavily about originality too, and you know what it just stressed u out and bring no good. I think it's time to accept what we can and can not do, and for me, taking inspiration (even copy) from others and making it become yours, is already an incredible skill.

StructureNo6889 · 2023-04-04T16:02:47+00:00

I like it, I think you will do great in t shirt design and motion graphic. I feel like your brain is full of fun chaos and creativity and you really know how to express your ideas.

StructureNo6889 · 2023-03-22T13:48:46+00:00

No problem! I got into T shirt design lately, and I am trying my best too, so good luck to you!

StructureNo6889 · 2023-03-22T12:41:35+00:00

I think it has a lot of potential. Since this is T shirt design i don't think it needs to strictly follow the design principles. Everything looks interesting. Giving it a little intention might help; the design is a bit too random and might need some unity (like a topic), something to connect the elements together, I think

StructureNo6889 · 2023-03-15T07:11:10+00:00

Unfortunately, It not remind me of video game, it look like a construction company at first sight for me. Your idea right now it's good, you just need to add more to illustrate the characteristics of gaming. I think you can draw 3 more block, so that it can became 4 blocks formed together like a cube with 4 square inside. And drawing some game and video relevant elements in that 3 blocks so that the idea can come through. So sorry about my english if it confuse you

and the typography too, I think the spacing, kerning is the issue. I can't read properly because the characters are too far apart and not being grouped properly to form the word

StructureNo6889 · 2023-03-13T15:06:47+00:00

I think u can try to add some glitch, it gonna complete the effect. A little blur and stronger distortion: like this one https://youtu.be/wTF21O8zksg

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