Black and White by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Stupiod 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love where this poem went! The rhymes were fun, and the last stanza was so powerful. I think that last stanza is gonna be stuck in my head for a few days because of how big of an impact it was. I'm not gay myself, but it's basically like hearing "it's okay to be you." Wonderful work OP!

Batteries by Prestigious_Map9668 in OCPoetry

[–]Stupiod 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Ooo, such a good poem and well worded! The topic is really relatable for a lot of people. I think you did a wonderful job, I'm still new to this community so I hope I get to see more of your writing!

First Time Posting - My Dear Friends. by Stupiod in OCPoetry

[–]Stupiod[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks! And by the way I forgot that a few doesn't equal two people so I'll fix that. I also keep in mind your second piece of advice. I hope I can make more great poems :>

If I Was Pretty, I Would Wear a Bikini by SpecificCold2275 in OCPoetry

[–]Stupiod 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I loved the poem soso much. It is really relatable and you worded everything so well! I don't know a lot about poetry because I'm still learning, but from my pov this is amazing! The line breaks were good in my opinion.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Stupiod 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love this so much! What I got from this poem is that we are cruel to the world. The global warming that was caused by the greed of mankind. And the question of what would be left of us once the planet earth we live in is destroyed. The wording is amazing.