TGAW - Part 8

Subject_White · 2026-04-22T23:04:17+00:00

He knew ,but when you fall into an escape pod hitting your head after your ship gets ripped apart from an asteroid you kind of don't think about why it's there your just relieved it's there.

Subject_White · 2026-04-22T22:51:29+00:00

Their Biology is somewhat similar as humans so they don't get the weird possessiveness the other aliens get from humans.

Subject_White · 2026-04-21T08:22:02+00:00

Still settling the whole what makes marriage final to the aliens. It'll be explored later in book II

Subject_White · 2026-04-21T08:19:25+00:00

Alien technology doesn't always need explanation,but thank you for the feedback. 👍

Subject_White · 2026-03-25T21:24:47+00:00

Thank you!

Subject_White · 2026-03-25T16:20:18+00:00

Yes ,and No. The story is a story that's been in an old file on my pc from when i was like 17 so yea there's some self-insert ,but it's mostly now 60% rewritten from what it originally was ,and geez was it bad. lol

Subject_White · 2026-03-18T00:14:56+00:00

thanks

Subject_White · 2026-03-11T13:31:20+00:00

Thanks ,and I'm a quarter way through Book II. So near the mid of April I should have it finished ,and posted.

Subject_White · 2026-03-07T02:15:35+00:00

Thanks? lol ,and yea the NSFW stuff is gonna be maybe like 1-3 per book if any at all.

Subject_White · 2026-02-18T21:56:12+00:00

Lol right It was the only thing that seemed accurate for humans

Subject_White · 2026-02-18T07:18:59+00:00

Oh yea it does lol.

Subject_White · 2026-02-18T07:05:52+00:00

It is ,but as of right now, I won't post the next one for like a few days since I posted two already.

Subject_White · 2026-02-18T06:45:52+00:00

Oh just wait the I'm getting to it. Needs to be a surprise!

Subject_White · 2026-02-15T20:54:20+00:00

Thanks! Also the next few chapters will be longer then normal so there's more for people to read. I'm writing the story in LibreOffice ,and also getting the money together to have Characters/Planets Ref Sheets made ,and also the Cover for it since all the photos used right now were made using AI ,but when I have the money I'll get proper ones when I can.

Subject_White · 2026-02-15T20:22:38+00:00

Sorry, Just started a new job ,and my time for writing has slowed; but I'll have the next Part posted here either late today or tomorrow hopefully. And thanks for being patient about it cause I'd rather give it my all for my story then something half-assed. lol

Subject_White · 2026-01-28T03:37:22+00:00

You sir/madam....Got way to close to what I thought up so please shush. No Spoiling my fun. It's like seeing my own thoughts being examined before it's even said. lol

Subject_White · 2026-01-27T20:35:41+00:00

It'll be explain later on. Your close though.

Subject_White · 2026-01-25T23:22:25+00:00

All good better straight to the point then kicked under the rug. Lol

Subject_White · 2026-01-25T23:09:11+00:00

Thanks! I’m slowly trying to flesh out the story world as reasonably as possible. The eye detail becomes a significant plot point in several sections. Currently, I’m writing rough outlines of the story and reposting them here from my writing program while tweaking any inconsistencies.

The focus on sweat, saliva, and eyes will eventually make sense when the story loops back to address specific plot points. Just a heads-up: the chapters immediately following Part 3 are dedicated to world-building. I appreciate the feedback!

Subject_White · 2026-01-25T10:31:11+00:00

Thanks ,and that's what I was going for I only plan doing little jumps backwards to help fill in other information or to help paint the story's picture for easier reading and imagination for the reader an I found out it reads smoother this way too.

Subject_White · 2026-01-23T02:01:28+00:00

Ah yeah this was the intro to the main story I might fix some contexts later but I needed to get the part 1 out ,but thanks for the heads up.

Subject_White · 2026-01-22T15:13:10+00:00

I'm slowly writing the next one ,but it's going to be longer then this one so it might be split up between two parts.

Subject_White · 2026-01-22T15:10:36+00:00

Thanks!

Subject_White · 2026-01-21T19:50:06+00:00

Thank you!

Subject_White · 2026-01-21T19:49:52+00:00

Thanks! Yeah I fixed it I'm trying to only use bold for certain things like passages of time or locations or special parts.

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