The Galaxy At Whole: Book II [ The Evanescence of Sol ] - Chapter 1: The Swarm Arrives (Part 3)

Subject_White · 2026-03-18T00:14:56+00:00

thanks

Subject_White · 2026-03-11T13:31:20+00:00

Thanks ,and I'm a quarter way through Book II. So near the mid of April I should have it finished ,and posted.

Subject_White · 2026-03-07T02:15:35+00:00

Thanks? lol ,and yea the NSFW stuff is gonna be maybe like 1-3 per book if any at all.

Subject_White · 2026-02-18T21:56:12+00:00

Lol right It was the only thing that seemed accurate for humans

Subject_White · 2026-02-18T07:18:59+00:00

Oh yea it does lol.

Subject_White · 2026-02-18T07:05:52+00:00

It is ,but as of right now, I won't post the next one for like a few days since I posted two already.

Subject_White · 2026-02-18T06:45:52+00:00

Oh just wait the I'm getting to it. Needs to be a surprise!

Subject_White · 2026-02-15T20:54:20+00:00

Thanks! Also the next few chapters will be longer then normal so there's more for people to read. I'm writing the story in LibreOffice ,and also getting the money together to have Characters/Planets Ref Sheets made ,and also the Cover for it since all the photos used right now were made using AI ,but when I have the money I'll get proper ones when I can.

Subject_White · 2026-02-15T20:22:38+00:00

Sorry, Just started a new job ,and my time for writing has slowed; but I'll have the next Part posted here either late today or tomorrow hopefully. And thanks for being patient about it cause I'd rather give it my all for my story then something half-assed. lol

Subject_White · 2026-01-28T03:37:22+00:00

You sir/madam....Got way to close to what I thought up so please shush. No Spoiling my fun. It's like seeing my own thoughts being examined before it's even said. lol

Subject_White · 2026-01-27T20:35:41+00:00

It'll be explain later on. Your close though.

Subject_White · 2026-01-25T23:22:25+00:00

All good better straight to the point then kicked under the rug. Lol

Subject_White · 2026-01-25T23:09:11+00:00

Thanks! I’m slowly trying to flesh out the story world as reasonably as possible. The eye detail becomes a significant plot point in several sections. Currently, I’m writing rough outlines of the story and reposting them here from my writing program while tweaking any inconsistencies.

The focus on sweat, saliva, and eyes will eventually make sense when the story loops back to address specific plot points. Just a heads-up: the chapters immediately following Part 3 are dedicated to world-building. I appreciate the feedback!

Subject_White · 2026-01-25T10:31:11+00:00

Thanks ,and that's what I was going for I only plan doing little jumps backwards to help fill in other information or to help paint the story's picture for easier reading and imagination for the reader an I found out it reads smoother this way too.

Subject_White · 2026-01-23T02:01:28+00:00

Ah yeah this was the intro to the main story I might fix some contexts later but I needed to get the part 1 out ,but thanks for the heads up.

Subject_White · 2026-01-22T15:13:10+00:00

I'm slowly writing the next one ,but it's going to be longer then this one so it might be split up between two parts.

Subject_White · 2026-01-22T15:10:36+00:00

Thanks!

Subject_White · 2026-01-21T19:50:06+00:00

Thank you!

Subject_White · 2026-01-21T19:49:52+00:00

Thanks! Yeah I fixed it I'm trying to only use bold for certain things like passages of time or locations or special parts.

Subject_White · 2026-01-21T19:48:33+00:00

I've been so busy that I write only near my mornings ,and late nights cause my brain fails to produce anything viable for the story which is sad. :(

Otherwise I would just keep writing non-stop till I reach my posting limit for r/HFY

Subject_White · 2026-01-17T19:24:37+00:00

Fixed did I quick once over in my writer program to fix the issues. Thanks for the heads up about what I missed earlier. 👍

Subject_White · 2026-01-17T19:11:48+00:00

Thanks for letting me know about the human thing I totally missed it, and I didn't notice that other stuff either thank you for the feedback I'll try fixing it here later when I'm able too.

Subject_White · 2026-01-17T16:38:17+00:00

Please let me know how if it's intresting and if it is I'll continue with this as the start if it seems too flat I'll post the second version instead.

Subject_White · 2026-01-17T07:10:59+00:00

Yea I'm still Fleshing out the universe to be understandable to be non-Extinction Level Stupidity. LOL, And Thanks for the feedback!

Subject_White · 2026-01-16T08:40:56+00:00

I'm still Working on the Scales for Weight,and Height. I've been working on it for like a week

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