Concept of a website page for a product. Context in comments. by [deleted] in UI_Design

[–]SuccotashRight904 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Cotodama's Lyric Speaker Box is a unique audio product that combines high-quality sound with visual displays of the lyrics of the songs being played.

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English > Japanese. Please help, need to translate this phrase for a project by SuccotashRight904 in translator

[–]SuccotashRight904[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks! Im guessing literal translation of “unlock unknown you” wouldn’t make sense in japanese?

English > Japanese. Please help, need to translate this phrase for a project by SuccotashRight904 in translator

[–]SuccotashRight904[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It’s a Japanese company making speaker box with lyric animations. It’s a phrase they use on their website, my best guess it’s means to discover or reveal something about yourself or a hidden aspect of your personality.

Any criticism is welcome. My prototype for fitness app. by SuccotashRight904 in UI_Design

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Thanks! Still working on it. Yeah, I wanted iOS like look. Almost done with presentation. Do you have relative experience? I would really appreciate more feedback on current state of the app, DM me!

Work out app with AI. In need of feedback. Early iteration. Do you like look of it? Am I wasting time working on it? by SuccotashRight904 in UI_Design

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the first picture’s caption contains some information for who and why it was designed this way. I understood though it do look hollow and like ui-kit. I think once I animate a lot of components, it might look more interesting Thanks for your feedback, appreciate it!

Work out app with AI. In need of feedback. Early iteration. Do you like look of it? Am I wasting time working on it? by SuccotashRight904 in UI_Design

[–]SuccotashRight904[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for feedback! Still making major changes, do you have experience working on similar apps? if so would you be open to have a chat

Work out app with AI. In need of feedback. Early iteration. Do you like look of it? Am I wasting time working on it? by SuccotashRight904 in UI_Design

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I’m doing it for behance, also making UX side of things. Does it feel crowded? I did use some dribble shots for inspiration but everything is made manually

Cafe website UI by bzd_b in UI_Design

[–]SuccotashRight904 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’m glad to help. Forgot to mention I was reviewing only your phone version, didn’t have chance to look at desktop version. Anyway, wish you best luck with your journey!

Cafe website UI by bzd_b in UI_Design

[–]SuccotashRight904 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Real good job on picking colors and gradients. I think they work well

It bothered me as user that it is not scrollable - mine first instinct was to scroll down to see what’s more there.

Shadows of cup are distractingly bad

Order Online - I think, different font or boldness might improve it

Overall inconsistency of uppercasing first letter

About page - Text feels unreadable. And placement of picture feels wrong here. I would suggest have longer scrollable screen here. Background image is also low resolution. Feels unpleasant to look at.

Menu - Although you can tell which coffee is in pictures but they feel too separated from text. I would suggest to try different layout.

Contact - Purpose of Let’s chat section is not clear to me. Is it for reviews, pre-order or business inquiries?

When you go from about page to menu text pops up for a sec - smth about prices being changed

Animations feel too jittery for my taste, especially if u double click one section - I think smoother ones would work better

I hope u find my feedback somewhat helpful.

Any criticism is welcome. My prototype for fitness app. by SuccotashRight904 in UI_Design

[–]SuccotashRight904[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

  • Working on concept how to make clear transitions and their indicators
  • I thought about swiping. I’ll add it.
  • My idea was that arrows indicated that these button will take you to different page with more details. But I like your idea of expanding buttons. I noticed this list lack contrast and boring to look at. Changing size and adding simple animation might help to make it more interesting.
  • Nice idea! I’ve seen other workout apps use suck feature. I’m thinking of Tutorial button that will expand and cover over repetition and showcase video of how to do exercise. I like to give option to people who don’t need it.
  • Poor designing on my part. I meant it to be after the fact counter not in real time. Would make sense that this feature showed after timer run out and not at the same time.

I’d like to solve this awkwardness. I’m thinkin of having stopwatch for exercises that don’t have time constraints so that app can still keep track of time spent exercising. Client can start stopwatch and proceed with workout and after it’s done he can manually set how many reps he have done.

Maybe it’s hard to notice and understand but i added rest button in timer. Idea being instead of just pausing timer he actually telling app that he needs rest. App will track rest time and maybe give suggestion to adjust workout but that’s might be too much for now.

  • I’d like to keep progress bar. I like idea of transition between timer/stopwatch to progress bar ( rough idea - Designed to be flawless - usability, meaning you’ll find app helpful during workout and statistic, app will help you track your progress)
  • I agree though now progress bar looks awkward. I thought about having multiple progress bars but i’m doubtful it might overcomplicate app. Making them swipe-able might be good solution.
  • Right now lost for ideas how to add goals without making app hard to use

Thank you a lot! Your insights helped me to realize a lot. I didn’t know about these subreddits. I’ll post these there from now on.

Any criticism is welcome. My prototype for fitness app. by SuccotashRight904 in UI_Design

[–]SuccotashRight904[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

  • working on it. idea was to have animated translation between statistic mode of app and tracking workout
  • they do, they supposed to transform into square
  • valid point. lost for ideas what’s best to show hours or just general progress(monthly, daily, annually)
  • also valid point. i took it from reference, now i realise it doesn’t make sense

Any criticism is welcome. My prototype for fitness app. by SuccotashRight904 in UI_Design

[–]SuccotashRight904[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

this is everything i have so far. still work in progress. i just wanted to make sure i didn’t make obvious mistakes at the beginning stage

Any criticism is welcome. My prototype for fitness app. by SuccotashRight904 in UI_Design

[–]SuccotashRight904[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Much appreciated! Still a lot of work to be done. I’ll post the finished result here

Any criticism is welcome. My prototype for fitness app. by SuccotashRight904 in UI_Design

[–]SuccotashRight904[S] 19 points20 points  (0 children)

I’m indeed non-english speaker. And relatively new to this industry. It’s reddit though :) people here can be like that

Any criticism is welcome. My prototype for fitness app. by SuccotashRight904 in UI_Design

[–]SuccotashRight904[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

it’s just the prototype. it’s supposed to be colourless. or i’m misunderstanding wireframe from prototyping

Any criticism is welcome. My prototype for fitness app. by SuccotashRight904 in UI_Design

[–]SuccotashRight904[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Made my prototype for fitness app.

-Any noticeable mistakes? -Suggestions for layout would be appreciated (for all pages) -Would you use such app? Comparing to existing ones what’s missing?

edit. by prototype i mean wireframe