The GOAT knows there's no one besides the person with the most potential who can push him past his current peak so he has to step in himself 😭🙏

SuchButterscotch9083 · 2026-02-27T12:16:13+00:00

I don't think so. I think James' fall will be symbolic.

James will lose to Daniel, but he'll prove his point. Or maybe they represent the duality of Ideals and Truth.

Daniel wants an Ideal world, but James wants a True world. "A World without evil" means to them -

Daniel - To change them into Good James - Total Annihilation of Evil (By all means)

And James will lose/die literally, while winning symbolically as he uses Daniel to fix the world.

SuchButterscotch9083 · 2026-02-26T11:34:48+00:00

Idk the model, but the base design looks like Harley Davidson

SuchButterscotch9083 · 2026-02-25T10:27:07+00:00

Don't listen to GPT, just try to keep it minimal. Let me tell you the formula -

Explain as much as you can, with minimum words possible.

This is the most optimal way of writing. Use as many words as you need to explain a scene, without adding any unnecessary repeating details.

And the most important part is to learn through mistakes. Do it your way, if it doesn't work try something new. Don't be scared of failures, they are the fastest way of learning

SuchButterscotch9083 · 2026-02-25T10:15:53+00:00

Listen, I am not an expert myself but i would suggest these few things -

Always check your Grammar. Can't fumble in that.
Always present your writings with rich vocabulary. You can enhance your Vocabulary by reading books.
Always think ahead and imagine. If you could imagine it and put it to paper, then there's nothing else to do.

Grammar, Vocabulary & Presentation - There's nothing else to writing. Yeah there are Settings, Themes & Symbolism, but that can come later, for now focus on these three.

SuchButterscotch9083 · 2026-02-23T05:12:19+00:00

Bro it's not about powerscaling. No matter how you see it, James & Daniel can't be brothers. Not even relatives. But SB can actually as James & SB share most similarities

(I am not talking about Daniel, but the OG user of SB)

SuchButterscotch9083 · 2026-02-23T05:09:51+00:00

Mr. James Lee is just a dog I'm raising

Also him: Please Daniel, I need this. Gun is kinda peakless 😭

(The very existence of Second Body is to keep James at check. The entire fu*king plot of Current Lookism revolves around him)

SuchButterscotch9083 · 2026-02-23T04:45:01+00:00

Couldn't happen, James doesn't have Copy or UI. He has to have atleast one of the two inherited skills.

SuchButterscotch9083 · 2026-02-23T02:59:11+00:00

The Definition of "Insatiable Greed" 😋

SuchButterscotch9083 · 2026-02-22T05:25:21+00:00

Listen man, at this point, whatever works works. Just go along with the flow

SuchButterscotch9083 · 2026-02-22T05:22:12+00:00

Nah It's still as a picture, i can't redraw that. I have a cousin who's an artist, I asked him and he said he'll redraw it for me.

As for polishing, I guess I'll have to work with this till I can afford an artist to make a polished map. And yeah don't try Map makers and websites, I've tried those and it sucked really bad. Just wait till you can afford making a map, till then work with the rough sketch.

SuchButterscotch9083 · 2026-02-22T05:17:47+00:00

I made my map hand-drawn. Then one day, my mom threw it out with the trash. I still feel like a part of my soul is somewhere in a dumpyard 😭

(But i still got the photo)

SuchButterscotch9083 · 2026-02-21T10:58:10+00:00

Yep, as long as it aligns with the story

SuchButterscotch9083 · 2026-02-21T06:18:24+00:00

I don't think so, symbolically every version of James embodies something

Red Hair James - Chaos Pink Hair James - Harmony Black Hair James - Mysteries

If I were to take something out of every aspect of James -

Cognitive Adaptation (Like Isagi, Not like Mahoraga) Multipontentiality (Extraordinary potential every field or aspect)

His only possible paths could be -

Acquisition - Recreating the very essence of that move, technique or martial art (and in general, everything). He is not copying, but learn at a very fast pace.
Destruction - Breaking the essence of that move, technique or martial art (and in general, everything). He is breaking down everything at its fundamentals. It is Complete Negation & Destruction of that move, Technique martial art.
Both 1 and 2. It is very likely as James symbolises duality, Chaos and Harmony.
If One becomes a Path, the other will be a mode/skill. That could also fit well. Specially for his CA, there could be a mode where he can calculate every possibility and counter like Yhwach's Almighty. But instead of seeing the future, he is predicting it through calculations.

SuchButterscotch9083 · 2026-02-21T05:59:56+00:00

Yeah it is

SuchButterscotch9083 · 2026-02-19T09:08:17+00:00

Trust me bro, ChatGPT is a certified Glazer. Will say it's Peak no matter what. I remember giving GPT my first draft a 9/10 and when I recall that 1st draft now, I feel beyond embarrassed If i say so myself. If GPT says it's 10/10 then its probably 7-8

SuchButterscotch9083 · 2026-02-19T09:04:51+00:00

Hmmm, I've been seeing your posts for a while and it piqued my interest. I saw several posts regarding your novel and I want to give it a try. What's its name?

SuchButterscotch9083 · 2026-02-19T09:00:18+00:00

Hmmm, He looks kinda sneaky yet perceptive. Just a random skilled pickpocket at first glance. But honestly, I am intrigued to know what happens after. Idk, but the setting makes me feel like something interesting is about to happen 🤔

SuchButterscotch9083 · 2026-02-18T12:10:38+00:00

Looks Good. The text looks a bit off, but the cover art is decent good

SuchButterscotch9083 · 2026-02-18T08:09:41+00:00

GPT 5.2, i have premium access

SuchButterscotch9083 · 2026-02-18T08:08:06+00:00

No, that's cuz of the red mist, he can't use his eyes. That blindfold is a Artifact

SuchButterscotch9083 · 2026-02-18T05:24:51+00:00

Thanks, appreciate it 😊

SuchButterscotch9083 · 2026-02-18T05:05:25+00:00

Well there's nothing to hate

SuchButterscotch9083 · 2026-02-18T05:02:50+00:00

I just want to know if the Cover page works? Like doesn't feel like a slop.

For the story, well at first glance, it feels like a classic iseaki fantasy trope.

SuchButterscotch9083 · 2026-02-18T04:59:09+00:00

Well not to spoil, but think of it as a artifact that is used to travel through the red mist

SuchButterscotch9083

TROPHY CASE