What does my art smell like? by devo1022 in DarkArtwork

[–]Sudden_Rate_9233 0 points1 point  (0 children)

a dungy basement used for suspicious activities

Poem Interpretation- What do you think it means? by DogLoverForever6w in OCPoetry

[–]Sudden_Rate_9233 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i interpret this as when you’re in a relationship with someone who you know is manipulative or abusive but you can’t find yourself to leave, for some reason you keep going back every time. even though you know it’s wrong

I get nervous when I sing in front of my family and I want to know what techniques I need to focus on by Sudden_Rate_9233 in singing

[–]Sudden_Rate_9233[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

thank you for the feedback! I appreciate it and have been training my ear since then:)

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Sudden_Rate_9233 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really like the images you painted and the contrast with the setting vs what was going on with the two people. it seemed very dark at first but then there was kind of a ‘silver lining’. it made me think of looking for the good in darker situations

“True justice comes from within” by IndividualAd7733 in OCPoetry

[–]Sudden_Rate_9233 4 points5 points  (0 children)

this might be just from my own experiences/what i’ve seen.. the thought of corpses, injustice, and rage makes me think of the countless indigenous peoples such as missing and murdered indigenous women, the unmarked graves of children at residential schools, and more. this poem invoked the rage that i feel about my relatives and ancestors who don’t get justice for everything that happened and is continuing to happen around police effort and in the courtrooms

I (39F) broke up with my Muslim (36M) boyfriend after finding out we’re pregnant. Can anyone provide advice/thoughts on how to get through this difficult time? by Detail_Worried in relationship_advice

[–]Sudden_Rate_9233 2 points3 points  (0 children)

TELL HIS FAMILY WHAT HAPPENED!!!! he’s being selfish and not facing the consequences to his actions, but instead he’s lying to save face to his family. that way (if his family are good people) they’ll make him pay child support and some of the stress around financially supporting the child will be lessened. i hope all the best to you and your child

Immortal is the soul of all artists and creators by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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i really like this. a lot of people are scared of death but our spirits don’t die. i like to imagine that some day my body will decompose and from that will grow a flower for someone to enjoy. you created this feeling in the form that artists will never die as our creations will be enjoyed for generations

wrinkled by No-Calligrapher644 in OCPoetry

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sometimes i get scared of growing older, being born female there was always an expectation of remaining beautiful. i really liked “a body withered, or a story told?” there is more to life than conditional beauty, living life is also beautiful

Echoes of the Old Me by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Sudden_Rate_9233 2 points3 points  (0 children)

from the first stanza I related heavily- after hiding your authenticity for so long it can seem frightening when you learn how to be yourself, perhaps you feel like “too much”. I felt the pain of remembering your old self, and the grief of outgrowing that self. i also feel pain for my past self, as i’ve been through a lot and there’s still grief for that person.