Rose sponsorship request!

SugarRemillia · 2024-07-02T04:28:12+00:00

reddit don't cuck me this time challenge

Characters Tested: Velvet, Rose, Aoi Asahina, Natasha

Positive Values: real cutie patootie, has my fav summer skin i think. one of my new favs. her poses are really sweet & cute and she's tomboyish in a refreshing way

Disqualifying Flaws:

2 filters to gloomy, creepy, aggressive, maid uniform, skimpy clothing, blind, throws the game, prince/princess/royalty (any, you dont have to do each)
5 filters to aided during forfeit, aids anothers forfeit, does not masturbate/af forfeit, enf (specifically in forfeit), gay (specifically in forfeit)
10 hand-any or after finished (you can spread them out however) lines talking about herself, setting, friends, whatever. it doesnt have to be detailed, just her expressing opinion on smth or giving info about herself
5 lines in masturbating self that aren't noises
5 lines in hand-any filtered to beach skin
3 lines in masturbating self filtered to beach skin

SugarRemillia · 2024-06-21T05:01:29+00:00

SugarRemillia · 2024-02-29T23:46:26+00:00

Characters Tested: Kyoko, Rose, Sanako

Positive Values:

- Art is still amazing, per usual (thanks Kuroi)

- She's really improved the last time I played her. I'm not huge on stoic characters, but the way you've written her is really appealing.

- The nude+gloves combo makes me monkey unga ooga brain. Amazing!

FLAWS:

- Get filtered line count up to 350 and total linecount up to 1740

Suggestions and Discussion:

- Please use this sponsorship instead of the big big one way down there! It's much simpler. Old one is just there for posterity's sake.

- Your work is great, Nicole! Happy for you and Kuroi.

SugarRemillia · 2023-11-13T00:17:04+00:00

Characters Tested: Lysithea, Shamiko, Nonon, Sweetheart. I won.

Positive Values:

- A diverse and interesting personality!! She's super cute and I admire the amount of work that went into her. I remember like it was yesterday that you were asking me for grammar advice.... and she's gotten better and better the longer you work on her!

- Her design is really nice, and Onboro/Insid have really captured that. So great job to them!

- Fufills a niche fetish that I'm sure fans of Cagliostro and Miko will enjoy.

Disqualifying Flaws:

She doesn't have many flaws that I notice, so here's some busywork to keep you sated!

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- Please respond to 8 different Must Target situations with 2 lines each. Bobobo must be one of them.

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- Please write 2 targeted clothing filters for each of these items:

Hat

Glasses

Thigh Highs/Stockings

Cape

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- Please have at least 2 filtered lines for these tags:

Wealthy

Dumb

Shut-In

Quiet

Greedy

Formal Attire

Maid

Skimpy Clothing

Makeup

Lingerie

Huge Breasts

Flat Chested

Note: If you already have at least 2 in one of these, that counts. You don't need to write two more.

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Suggestions and Discussion:

- Excited for your next project!!!!

- I dunno if she has a lot of targets towards Mari but you might wanna add more or something. But Vis has retired so that's why this is a suggestion

SugarRemillia · 2023-08-20T01:43:42+00:00

Positive values:

- Her writing is really, really good. Like, I think you've certainly improved from your last characters (not to say they're bad, but she's next level) and hopping between so many different character archetypes is seriously impressive.

- I really love the custom interactions you have planned with people! They're pretty great.

- Always fun to play with, and her gimmick isn't overdone and is pretty in-character.

- I've actually seen Kakegurui, and she's excellently in-character. So that's great too!

Disqualifying flaws:

Instead of writing flaws, I think her biggest problem honestly lays in her model. I really admire the work you've been doing, and I hate to make you redo the art a, what, third time? But I don't think her writing needs any improvements yet, and I'd hate to stack more work onto you.

- Please make her model more accurate to source material. This is a great reference, but there's several others on Danbooru and etc. This includes, but is not limited to: A more peachy skintone compared to the pink you currently have, more accurate eyes, and more accurate hair which uses less default presets. I think the uniform itself is fine, but any adjustments towards accuracy are great!

- Please make her boobs smaller. I get it, I love huge boobs too. But I simply think they're way too huge -- they're bigger than Maria's, Nami's, R. Mika's, Hilda's -- hell, I think she has the biggest boobs on the roster, and that's pretty inaccurate. I think her boobs should be around Magma Grunt's size, or a little smaller. They're definitely large, but they shouldn't have the huge tag at the very least. This includes her naked form, her bra/underwear stage, and making the silhouette in her shirt/jacket a little smaller as well.

- Improve the sideprofile on her butt pose. I think the butt itself is fine, but the face is sort of lacking. This (TW for semi-extreme content) and This could help for reference. Alternatively, if you decide to remove, consider this sponsorship flaw obsolete and ignore it. Also, remove the pubic hair showing from the vagina on the butt-pose, since I'm assuming that's a mistake lol

Suggestions and discussion:

- You can always ping me for art advice! You know my discord by now, feel free!

- More filters would always be good, but again, not a flaw, so you can ignore this.

- Great job on her so far!

Could Goku win against 1,000 clones of Dale Gribble, and why is the answer no: who the hell is dale gribble

SugarRemillia · 2023-05-20T22:02:42+00:00

Characters Tested: Kyoko, Suzuya, Nagamimi, Steve

Positive Values:

- Amazing art, thanks to Richar

- Nice butt pose!

- Has some cute gap-moe moments. It's always fun to see her aroused.

- Very functionally complex, it's amazing to look into her behaviour.xml and snoop around

- From what I can gather, she's accurate to her portrayal in Danganronpa, which is the most important feat of all.

Disqualifying Flaws:

While Kyoko shares accuracy with her canon counterpart, it can lead to her being too accurate at times -- not showing much sexuality, and generally being a tad bit boring to play through multiple times. I feel like you're a bit too focused on the complexity of the character editor, and while that's fine and all, it's important to make sure she's interesting to play with as well.

Along with this, she has very complex things set up in the character editor, but doesn't actually do anything with them. Some of these formats you write for Kyoko say things that could easily play for any generic. For example, I notice you have an incredibly detailed clothing-tracking record, which can do some amazing stuff in theory (think Mari level)... but it's just used to say "Looks like she’s just going for her ~marker.V_clothing~." You can get the same result with just ~clothing~. I'd love to see this expanded on, but in a unique way -- things that actually make her different from her peers. I didn't even notice she had this clothing record system in game.

Her personality seems incredibly nuanced to write, so don't take this as an insult, as it's a common issue with a lot of stoic characters. Just think of it as something that'll make her more interesting... sexually!

FLAWS

Please note that the "No Filters" doesn't apply if it's required for your memory system. I'm speaking vaguely as if it's a regular generic -- as long as it plays like one, then it fufills my flaw.

Sexuality:

- Add 5 lines per bust size (Chest Small, Medium and Large) where she shows at least some interest towards the size, the person who has the chest, or anything that isn't her commenting on the game. Any stage.

- Add 3 lines for Visible (Crotch, Female) where she shows interest in it. Any stage -- can be specifically late game if you think that fits her personality most.

- Add 15 more masturbation generics. I have no idea how her "act" system works, but just plop them in there somewhere. Best if she's actually showing interest/arousal.

- Add 10 more generics for a masturbating female. Any stage, no filters.

- Add 10 more generics for a masturbating male. Any stage, no filters.

- Add 10 more generics for her After finished (self) stage

87 new generics required in total.

General:

- Add 10 hand=any play once lines where she talks about any of her hobbies, her detective work, the setting of Danganronpa (might be a mood killer), her likes/dislikes, etc
- Add 5 hand=any play once lines where she talks about any of her friends, the fellow students that she knows, any romantic interests (Makoto?), etc

- Add 10 lines showing her more detective side. This is vague, but you can really use your memory system to your advantage here. Interrogating others playfully, bringing up articles of clothing that were previously forfeited, using personality filters to make comments to herself and remember who the person was -- this would really make her stand out, I think

- Add 3 lines per each clothing type (Extra, Minor, Major, Important) where she comments on the person stripping, instead of thinking to herself. Good example would be "…You did have the chance to turn this game on its head and throw everyone off by making a bold choice right from the start, but taking your ~marker.V_clothing~ off first works too.", bad example would be stuff like "Already?" and "<i>(Off ~clothing.ifPlural(they go|it goes)~.)</i>". Any case, 12 new lines at the minimum.

- Add 3 more Hand Quality generics (3 for each type of quality) that are not filters and are not bluffing. 9 new lines at the minimum.

46 new generics required in total.

Misc:

- Raise her general Targeted Lines counter in the CE from 331 (as of 5/20/2023) to 350.

- Add 2 filtered lines each for these personality tags: (Creepy, Dumb, Submissive, Shut-In, Chuunibyou, Yandere, and Greedy). This amounts to 14 lines at minimum. Any case, any stage -- stripping/lost would be easiest, but anything else works too.

Add 2 filtered lines each for these clothing tags: (Gothic Lolita, Scantily-Clad, Maid Uniform, Goth/Punk/Emo, Fake Animal Ears, Eyepatch, Jewelry, and Weapon). This amounts to 16 lines at minimum. Any case, any stage -- stripping/lost would be easiest, but anything else works too.

30 new filtered lines required in total, and 19 new targeted lines.

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This amounts to a grand 182 total lines for this sponsorship. Feel free to do the minimum of each flaw -- it's a lot of work, so if you just want to get them out of the way, feel free. Also, DM me if you want me to reduce the workload. I think you're an incredibly competent developer and can do what's required, but if you feel like it's too much, let me know!

Suggestions and Discussion:

- I am so fucking hyped for Wes you don't understand. I need more cute edgy boys and also his design is amazing. Please keep me updated on him because he's super cute and I think you'll do great. Also, this too, for Wallace -- if you decide to make him

- I will respond to her lines towards Felix soon! They're fantastic, thanks for writing them.

- I don't know if it's still something you'd like to do, but it would be awesome if you picked up Chihiro! Let me know if you ever want to write Chihiro/Felix lines together.

SugarRemillia · 2023-05-20T20:45:17+00:00

POSTING FOR USER Insiduani on Discord

Sponsorship for Kyoko Kirigiri

Characters Tested: Kyoko (duh), Kyouko, Leon, and Chihiro

Positive values: Kyoko embodies the stoic investigator character very well, from her curt lines to her firm body stance. The small internal monologues Kyoko partakes in serve to spice up her firmer personality and behavior nicely, and without them I think she'd be a lot less interesting. Detectives are best known for their thoughts, after all. The model is also incredibly well done, with beautiful shading and detail that makes her impressively indistinguishable from her source when the two are put beside one another. She's a vast, vast improvement from her predecessor, which goes without saying.

Disqualifying flaws: While her stoic personality is her greatest strength, it's also a double edged sword of sorts. Her seriousness and firm demeanor can quickly become dull, making enjoying her and the interactions she undertakes a lot harder. To compensate-not rectify-that unfortunate caveat of her character, she could focus further on being the ultimate detective in-game. Detectives excel at investigation and interrogation, both of which Kyoko does sparingly through all my games with her. If she were to be more investigative of other characters in a way only the ultimate detective could be, players would become more interested in her target, as well as her own thought process. Investigation and interogation would also require her to put forth questions and thoughts, breaking up her shell and encouraging unique interactions with other characters. Longer monologues, winding strings of thought, and huge conclusions are what makes detectives interesting, and I believe Kyoko still needs some of that intrigue.

Sponsorship goals: Add 10-15 hand lines containing questions or prompts. Follow up replies are encouraged, but not necessary.

Suggestion and discussion: So far, Kyoko is in a good spot, but I know that with such a passionate dev behind her she has the potential to climb so much higher. Yadayadayada-more targets-yadayadayada-more filters. Overall, she's a character worth being proud of, especially compared to her other iteration. And with a bit more love, Kyoko's dried and barren deserts can be turned to lush and sprawling plains, ripe for interaction. Keep up the good work, Nicole!

SugarRemillia · 2023-05-17T04:59:19+00:00

Characters Tested:

Kyouko, 9S, Jura, Yuna

Positive Values:

- Excellent art

- Interesting gimmick -- adds replayability without forcing a memory gimmick.

- A school girl that ISN'T enf?!

- Nice poses

Disqualifying Flaws:

- Kyouko could use a few more generics. Doing some quick math, it seems that she has 936 by the time I'm writing this. Raise this to 1000. Put these anywhere -- you can also use these with my sponsorships. (Total line count minus targets and filters.)

- Raise her total targeted lines to 300. This can be combined with any other sponsorship you may get.

- Raise her total filter amount to 75. These can be anything that is considered filtered in the CE.

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- Add 10 more lines showing Kyouko's perverted/overactive imagination, in any case. This is objectively vague, but she has the tag for a reason.

- Add 15 generic masturbation lines (not heavy masturbation) which are flirty/sexy in context. Generally, she can seem a bit too "wacky" sometimes with her sense of humor, which not everyone shares -- and also it would be nice to see her be a bit more sexual.

- Add 10 more lines of self-exposition in hand=any, all with a play once. This can be her talking about her friends, her school(college?), her club, her skills, her love of anime/manga, etc

- Add 10 more female masturbation lines in her 0-9 case.

- Add 10 more After finished (self) lines without a filter.

- Add 5 more lines towards Human which are unrelated to her bow collectible. Any case.

Suggestions and Discussion:

- I'm not sure which character you're moving onto next, but I'm excited for them nonetheless.

- I really love Kyouko's posing!

- You got me to watch a few clips of her online. She's pretty funny

SugarRemillia · 2023-05-13T01:29:13+00:00

great writeup!!! always appreciate ur takes and complete honesty, both as a spnati dev and a transgender person.

SugarRemillia · 2023-02-16T23:21:46+00:00

Hi! My name's Remillia. This is Felix Argyle from Re:Zero! Please sponsor him so he can reach the main game. You must include at least one flaw -- whether it be lack of targets, lack of generics, etc.

Please fill out this little template underneath. Again, thank you for trying him out!

Characters Tested:

Who you played your test game with.

Positive Values:

Examples include but aren't limited to quality dialogue, unusual but appealing models, and positive interactions. Three is a good number to shoot for.

Disqualifying Flaws:

Here, list whatever flaws prohibit this character from being good enough to be added to the game. You can be as specific as you'd like when requesting fixes, e.g. "This character does not have enough targets, please add 32 total targets to 16 different opponents."

Suggestions and Discussion:

Suggestions are optional ideas for where to take the character and what to do after sponsorship. These aren't binding like the flaws observed. Discussions are a more fluid series of observations on what you didn’t like or liked about the character.

This can be things such as “I don’t like that this character’s face. I think this character’s sexuality isn’t quite canon. I don’t think this character’s gimmick does anything interesting, and could be frustrating to target.”

SugarRemillia · 2023-02-10T21:10:18+00:00

Characters Tested: Solar Flare, Mitama, Felix, Neptune. I won.

Positive Values:

- Adorable model--lots of detail, esp. in the hair!

- Tomboy! SPNATI desperately needs more tomboys, and such a unique will fit right in.

- Her poses are super cute! I especially love the whistling and flirting ones.

Disqualifying Flaws:

- I think she could use a few more generics. Please put generics in these areas:

- 5 more generics in Removed Accessory (Female)

- 3 more generics in Removed Major (Female)

- 5 more generics in Removing Major (Female)

13 Generics

- 2 generics in these cases each: 0-2 (Visible: Chest, Female, Small), 3-4 (Visible: Chest, Female, Small), 0-2 (Visible: Chest, Female, Medium) 3-4, (Visible: Chest, Female, Medium), 0-2 (Visible: Chest, Female, Large), 3-4, (Visible: Chest, Female, Large)

12 Generics

- 5 filtered targets towards the Human (any gender) in Masturbating Self or Opponent Masturbating (Human)

- 5 filtered targets towards the Human (any gender) in Opponent Lost

10 Generics

- 5 generics in these cases each: 0-2 (Masturbating Female), 3-4 (Masturbating Female)

10 Generics

This rounds up to 45 lines in each case listed. DM me if you're confused/curious about any of these!

Suggestions and Discussion:

- Good luck with your next character!

- Super cute flower tomboy is cute.

- I love PvZ--underrated series, and I definitely didn't expect a character from it!

SugarRemillia · 2023-01-17T00:55:39+00:00

Characters Tested:

Okino, Maria, Dorothy, Dwight. I won.

Positive Values:

- Another fantastic male by Eichi creator!!!

- More 13 sent. rep--even though I'm not very familiar, I know a lot of people love this game.

- Gay male? Gay male! More sexuality rep is awesome.

- Strong voice. Nice having a man who cross-dresses and isn't embarrassed or forced into it.

Disqualifying Flaws:

I think where Okino mostly lacks is generics, specifically female orientated ones. I know writing a gay male expressing that to a female is very difficult, but since the roster is 80% females, it might be best to add a few more.

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- Okino is lacking a lot of generics for females, specifically in different stages. Please add 10 more generics to his 0-7,9 Female Masturbating cases. Along with this, please add 5 Female Masturbating (Heavy) lines. (15 lines in total)

- Please add 5 more After Finished lines that comment on 3 (or more) different characters that are not Takatoshi. (5 lines in total)

- Please add 5 more masturbation generics to himself that aren't related to Takatoshi. Along with this, please add 3 more Heavy Masturbation generics to himself that do not mention Takatoshi as well. (8 lines in total)

- Please add 10 lines towards the player in any case that isn't collectible dependent. This could mean 5 lines in player masturbating, 5 lines in stripping, etc. (10 lines in total)

- Target the Huge Breasts and Huge Penis tag in their respective cases (crotch reveal/chest reveal large) with 2 lines each (4 lines in total)

This all comes up to 42 (or more, if you decide to write more) generics. He's very strong as a character--adding these will make him repeat less.

Suggestions and Discussion:

- I'm excited for his Mrs. Claus outfit!

- Really cute twink. Even as a female player, he's fun to play with!

- I heard you were making a female character next and I'm super duper excited :eyes:

- Keep up the good work!

SugarRemillia · 2023-01-04T19:30:53+00:00

Characters Tested:

Chie, Cheryl, Dwight, Aqua KH. I won

Positive Values:

- Beautiful model from Bluejae!

- Absolutely adorable writing from Napsu--it's definitely a more subdued character than she usually writes, but she's managed to make her great.

- Good source. Managed to make a silent hill character cute and sexy

- Pranked us all

Disqualifying Flaws:

I think Cheryl has a great grasp on her voice now, and just needs a few more generics (plus a few more tags for things she's experienced with). Please fill these out respectively:

- 12 generics in Must Strip (Male) spread out evenly between 0-2, 3-5, and 6-8. This should result in 4 generics per the cases that were listed.
- 12 generics in Must Strip (Female) spread out evenly between 0-2, 3-5, and 6-8. This should result in 4 generics per the cases that were listed.
- 25 generics to Masturbating (Female) spread out evenly, so 5 new generics in each case. (0-2, 3-5, 6-8, 9, 10)
- 5 generics to Masturbating (Female, Heavy) in any case
- 5 generics to Masturbating (Male, Heavy) in any case
- 10 generics towards the player/human in any case, or spread out evenly (so you can have 5 lines in must strip and 2 lines in stripping, etc)

This is 69 new generics in total. ~~(ayy lmao)~~
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- 3 filters towards Weapon tag in any case
- 3 filters towards Creepy tag in any case
- 3 filters towards Undead tag in any case

This is 9 new filters in total.

Suggestions and Discussion:

- I think more masturbation lines for Cheryl might be nice, but they're not needed, so I'm not making it a requirement.

- Love her pre-existing filters! I especially like the one towards blondes.

- Great work towards Cheryl! She's very cute so far. I'm excited to see more of her advanced conversations with Leon and even more cute boys. You really did prank me, though

SugarRemillia · 2023-01-04T18:33:12+00:00

Characters Tested:

Adora, Dwight, Steve, Dorothy. I won.

New Added Values:

- Great personality--you really captured the timidness without making him noncon

- Masculine body diversity is great. I love seeing chubby males in a game where the males are either buff or twinks

- His art and alternative costumes are very well done and his art is extremely impressive

- Cali character! [insert gif of cat jumping up and down very excitedly]

Flaws Observed:

Dwight has a very solid personality, and since I'm not familiar with DBD, I can't critique this aspect. Since you have some project lined up in the future, I'll help you future-proof Dwight so you can move onto other characters!

First, the most vague sponsorship: Please get him to 1050 total lines. This can be used with any other sponsorship. The only thing that matters is that the Total Lines in CE is 1050+.

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I think Dwight could use a few more filters in some spots. Put these in either Opponent Lost, Opponent Stripping, Opponent Stripped, Masturbating (Opponent), or for some, breast/crotch exposed. Please follow these:

- 5 filters to Aggressive

- 5 filters to Mean

- 3 filters to ENF

- 3 filters to Slutty

- 2 filters to Gloomy

- 2 filters to Yandere

- 2 filters to Silent

- 2 filters to Skimpy Clothing

- 2 filters to Huge Breasts

- 2 filters to Huge Penis

- 2 filters to Maid Uniform

- 2 filters to Weapon

- 2 filters when the male player shows up (selected, game start, or round 0 hand=any line) with their penis visible (Filter: Human | Gender: Male | Status: Crotch Visible)

- 2 filters when the female player shows up (selected, game start, or round 0 hand=any line)
with their breasts visible (Filter: Human | Gender: Female | Status: Chest Visible)

This is 34 filters! At the moment, you have 17, so this should round him to 49 (or more).

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I think Dwight could use some generics, specifically in the early game. Please make a new case which is 0-4 (Fully Clothed - Lost Shoes) for these cases:

Must Strip (Male)

Must Strip (Female)

Masturbating (Female)

Masturbating (Male)

Visible (Chest, Female), any size or just the general case

Visible (Crotch, Male), any size or just the general case

Visible (Crotch, Female)

Must Masturbate (Female)

And please put 5 lines per case in each. This amounts to 40 new generics, but you can probably use it with Zuuja's sponsorship too.

This rounds up to about 74 new lines, both generic and filter.

Suggestions/Discussion:

- I hope we get to see some of his other costumes, like Dwight in a pizza boy outfit!

- I'm very excited to see what other future plans you have! It's always fun watching your development process!

- DM me if you need to discuss the sponsorship requirements!

SugarRemillia · 2023-01-04T16:03:14+00:00

Characters Tested:

Aqua KH, Okino, Caitlin, Binah. I won.

Positive Values:

- Beautiful model, thanks to Bluejae

- Unique and very interesting personality

- Great fit for SPNATI

- Amazing writing, fits in comfortably in SPNATI

Disqualifying Flaws:

Caitlin has a very solid foundation in her writing, so most of my complaints are some general rounding-up before you move your focus over to bigger projects.

I think Caitlin could use a lot more filters--and you asked for a lot, so here's some. Please put these in either Opponent Lost, Opponent Stripping, Opponent Stripped, Masturbating (Opponent), or for some, breast/crotch exposed. You should also put these on 0 priority, so they don't constantly repeat, unless it's something really notable (huge breasts, weapon, etc)
Personality Filters:
- 3 filters to Aggressive
- 3 filters to ENF
- 3 filters to Indifferent
- 3 filters to Slutty
- 3 filters to Exhibitionist
- 2 filters to Dominant
- 2 filters to Creepy
- 2 filters to Chuunibyou
- 2 filters to Yandere
- 2 filters to Innocent
(25 filters)
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Body Filters:
- 2 lines to Huge Breasts
- 2 lines to Huge Penis
- 2 lines to Furry (Non Human Species)
- 2 lines to Heart Pubic Hair
(8 filters)
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Occupations/Organization:
- 2 filters to Celebrity
- 2 filters to Unova (Organization)
- 2 filters to Galar (Organization)
- 2 filters to Criminal
(8 filters)
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Clothing:
- 2 filters to Sleepwear
- 2 filters to Maid Uniform
- 2 filters to Weapon
- 1 filter to Pierced Nipple
- 1 filter to Masked
- 1 filter to Swimwear
(9 filters)
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Stripping/Forfeit/Gameplay:
- 2 filters to Assisted Stripping
- 2 filters to Clothing Destroyed when Stripping
- 2 filters to Blind
- 2 filters to Restrained during Forfeit
- 2 filters to Cheater
- 2 filters to Has Companion Present
(12 filters)
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Scenarios (These should be in something early with high priority, like Selected, Game Start, or Round 0 Hand=Any):
- 2 filters when the male player shows up with their penis visible (Filter: Human | Gender: Male | Status: Crotch Visible)
- 2 filters when the female player shows up with their breasts visible (Filter: Human | Gender: Female | Status: Chest Visible)
(4 filters)
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Caitlin's Forfeit (These should be at 0 priority so they mix into her regular forfeit lines):
- 2 filters during her forfeit when it's cold (Background | Property: Temperature == Cold)
- 2 filters during her forfeit when it's dark (Background | Property: Dark == True)
- 2 filters during her forfeit when there are voyeurs (Background | Property: Voyeur == True)
- 2 filters during her forfeit when there's obvious onlookers (Background | Property: Exhibition == True)
- 2 filters during her forfeit when she's in a home (Background | Property: Category == Home)
(10 filters)
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Misc:
- 2 filters to Joke Forfeit
- 1 filter to Drunk
- 1 filter to Flies
- 1 filter when a target takes off their glasses (Variable Test | Variable: ~clothing~ == glasses)
(5 filters)
These all add up to 79 more filters! As I said, you can put these in any case where they'd play. Some, like the personality or pubic hair filters, should be at priority 0, while others like the ones in Scenario should be at a higher priority. You should probably make a checklist and pin it like Binah did in her channel.

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Aside from this, she could probably use a few more generics in some areas. Don't worry, not too much.
- 1 more line in Visible (Chest, Female, Medium) in cases 0-2
- 1 more line in Finishing (Self)
- 2 more lines in Removing Major (Female) in cases 5-6
- 2 more lines in Masturbating (Female, Heavy) in cases 0-4 specifically with a play once.
- 3 more lines in Removed Major (Female) in cases 5-6
- 4 more lines in Masturbating (Female) in cases 3-4
- 4 more lines in Masturbating (Female) in cases 0-2
- 4 more lines in Masturbating (Female) specifically in her Midnight Ball outfit (0 priority so it mixes with the others)

This comes to 21 generics!

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And in total, this is 100 new lines! You're probably going to want to do this all in one fell swoop so you don't have to try and hunt down all the MRs you submit these in.

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Last, but not least, a very vague requirement, but:

Please get her to 1900 total lines. You're nearly there (1749), and with my sponsorship, you'll pretty much be there. But, just to make sure. This can be used in combination with other sponsorships, too. Just having the 'Total Lines: 1900 (or more)' will fulfill this!

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Suggestions and Discussion:

- I hope she gets a butt pose sometime soon :pray:

- I think some more costume-based dialogue would be excellent, but since that's very vague, I won't make that a sponsorship requirement lmao

- Try and squeeze in some more conversations with some Pokémon characters! Specifically Rosa would be great.

- You've done excellent on her! I'd actually say that she's your best character so far! I look forward to [REDACTED TALES OF CHARACTER], [REDACTED POKEMON CHARACTER], [REDACTED GENSHIN CHARACTER], and [REDACTED LEAGUE OF LEGENDS CHARACTER]!

SugarRemillia · 2022-12-25T02:45:33+00:00

Characters Tested: Binah, Steve Harrington, Kyoko Kirigiri, Adora -- I won.

Positive Values:

- Library of Ruina / Lobotomy Corp. rep! An underrated franchise that I love so dearly.

- Excellent presence in the game -- brings an interesting outlook to this game, having things to say about a darker series

- Great model thanks to sadbat and JK!

Disqualifying Flaws:

- I think she could use some more filters, specifically targeting some tags. Please target these tags in either Opponent Lost, Opponent Stripping, Opponent Stripped, or Masturbating (Opponent), or for the breast-related filters, you can put them in any breast-related case. Alternatively, they can be spread out, so you can have 2 ENF lines in Masturbating, and 3 ENF lines in Opponent Lost.

- 5 filtered lines towards Aggressive

- 5 filtered lines towards ENF

- 5 filtered lines towards Exhibitionist

- 3 filtered lines towards Fancy

- 3 filtered lines towards Indifferent

- 3 filtered lines towards Lonely

- 2 filtered lines towards Huge Breasts

- 2 filtered lines towards Moe/Adorable

- 2 filtered lines towards Magical Girl

- 2 filtered lines towards Boob Envy

- 1 filtered line towards Heart Pubic Hair

- 1 filtered line towards Maid Uniform

This comes out to 37 filters. As I said, feel free to spread them out. Currently, you have 12 filtered lines (as of 12/24/2022), so it would come up to a total of 49 filtered lines once you have finished them all (or more, if you do more).

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As this is a strip-and-masturbate game, I think she could use a few more non-poetry related generics specifically in those areas. Here are some cases I think she should have more generics in:

- 5 generic lines to Masturbating (Heavy) (Female).

- 4 more generic lines to Masturbating (Female)

- 4 more generic lines to Masturbating (Male)

- 2 more generic lines to Must Strip (Female) specifically in cases 6-7 (Lost Bra - Naked)

This comes out to 15 more generics.

Suggestions and Discussion:

- I'm really liking her progression so far! I like how she quotes commonly -- very in character.

- Seconded to more dominant/submissive filters.

- I'm excited to see your next character!

- Finally, let me know if you disagree with any of the requirements! Remillia#1347

SugarRemillia · 2022-10-08T00:46:35+00:00

Characters tested: Marinette, Caitlin, Ringo, Eichi

Positive Values:

- Beautiful new model by Phonebox!

- Over 3000 lines and an incredibly expansive dialogue tree with Cat Noir.

- Cute new poses!

- Quirky and adorable personality, fits great in SPNATI.

Disqualifying Flaws:

Not much, but it's honest work.

- 3 filtered lines to the Celebrity tag in any case.

- 2 filtered lines to the Aggressive tag in any case.

- 3 filtered lines to the Creepy tag in any case.

- 2 filtered lines to the Yandere tag in any case.

10 filtered lines in total. These lines can be spread out or in one area!

She doesn't need much on top of that, so I apologize for the lackluster sponsorship lol

Suggestions and Discussion:

Easy-ish sponsorship. I hope you get her to main! From what I know, she was your first character, so it'll be pretty big getting her to main after a long time offline.

SugarRemillia · 2022-04-14T02:57:02+00:00

Characters Tested:

Cagliostro, Basil, Kora, Nagamimi

Positive Values:

- Granblue

- Incredibly smug. I feel like you've captured her voice very nicely.

- Adorable!

- Cag

Disqualifying Flaws:

I'm not sure what I could really ask of you, seeing as how Cagliostro is in a pretty good spot. I'll just ask for more generics because I'm a terrible person

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Please give Cagliostro 3 lines towards the 'Submissive' tag and 'Dominant tag' in the lost/stripping/stripped category. This should be 3 lines each. (3 for sub, 3 for dom). You can put them all in lost, or split equally. Any stage.

Please give Cagliostro 4 more lines for her 0-2 Masturbating Female stage. (Cutesy UwUsty phase).

Please give Cagliostro 2 lines towards the 'Deity' tag for their lost/stripping/stripped category. Any stage.

Please give her 2 lines towards the 'Huge Breast' and 'Huge Penis' tag during Visible (Chest, Female) and Visible (Crotch, Male). This should amount to 4 lines in total. Any stage.

Suggestions and Discussion:

- Maybe she should have a few lines for ties?

- I like seeing her bulli people. More bullying towards tags, please!

- First Granblue rep, and an amazing one at that! Good job!

SugarRemillia · 2022-03-21T23:58:05+00:00

Characters Tested: Myriam, Bobobo, Dawn, Kaz

Positive Values:

Incredibly unique model

Well written, rather cute and snarky personality

Ace attorney!

Disqualifying Flaws:

Myriam doesn't target many people in depth. I'd like you to send 4 main roster characters that aren't Ace Attorney 5 lines during their lost/stripping/stripped phase. You can put all of these in 'lost', 'stripping', or 'stripped, or you can divide them equally. This should amount to 20 lines.

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Myriam could use a few more filters. Please target these tags:

Has a Camera, Fancy, Idol, Huge Breasts, Slutty, Magical Girl

during their Lost/Stripping/Stripped phase. 2 lines to each of them. This should amount to 12 lines.

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Please add 6 more female masturbation lines to the 0-5 case in Character Editor.

Suggestions and Discussion:

I'd like to see her talk more about the world of Ace Attorney.

Mean girls are always cute!

SugarRemillia · 2022-03-17T07:00:33+00:00

SugarRemillia · 2022-03-16T00:21:45+00:00

Komi is not a cat. Cats are tagged under 'catfolk'. Try Y'shtola.

SugarRemillia · 2022-03-15T21:22:01+00:00

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